Crash

[inner_kyuubi]

In retrospect, Deidara thought that a shower curtain would’ve solved all of his problems.

Well…maybe not all of his problems. He’d have to get rid of Tobi to do that. And forget he ever knew Tobi. Because if he got rid of Tobi while he still remembered him, he’d have new problems piled on top of the old ones, so really, it’d be easier to just

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[pyroinsomnia]

I swear, your yaoi smut is the only smut I ever read. It's so awesome!

I never put the "favorite line" thing, so here's mine~

“You’re too fucking tall, un.”

It made me laugh. xDDD I just loved that line. ♥

This was so awesome~~ ♥♥♥

[inner_kyuubi]

Awwww, yay. XD Thanks, Melly! ♥ My smut is never very graphic, I've noticed...*dies*

XDDDDDD That line came out of nowhere, seriously. I was writing and I paused for a minute, and there it was. It's so Deidara. XD

♥♥♥

[pyroinsomnia]

I think that's what I love about it, actually. XDDD

Yay for random lines of awesome? 8D

[sei_kou_ki]

“I’m a good boy, aren’t I?” Tobi whispered. “I want to show you how good I am, Deidara. Please.”

Holyshitholyshit, I loveyouloveyouloveyou. This was just AMAZING. Tobi might be young and innocent, but he's still a young male, hawhaw.

[inner_kyuubi]

<3333333333

I LOVE YOU TOOOOOOOO. ♥♥♥ I'm always happy to serve my fellow fangirls. XD

DAMN STRAIGHT HE'S A YOUNG MALE. UNF UNF. 8D

[sei_kou_ki]

SERVE MEEEE

AHAHA. Somehow, I can imagine Deidara acting like he's old and complaining about how enthusiastic Tobi is. The troubles of having a younger lover, lulz. "GODDAMN, IT'S LIKE FUCKING THE ENERGIZER BUNNY."

...um.

[jussam1]

FINALLY KAJGKJGSAFKJLGKJGDF. SHOWER SCENE AUGH I'VE BEEN WANTING FOREVER JKAKJGKJFG I LOVE YOU. D8 <3333

Eeee taller Tobi is adorable Tobi. Yeeeees. <333333

[inner_kyuubi]

OMG I HAD NO IDEA PEOPLE WERE ACTUALLY WAITING FOR THIS. O.o I suck for stalling out so long. BUT I'M THRILLED THE END RESULT WAS WORTH IT. ♥♥♥

I love you too. XD

I KNOW, RITE. Ugggh. Taller Tobi makes my pants happy. 8D

[vazavati]

..........That was flamin' awesome. ♥ My familiarity with Deidara & Tobi, admittedly, is not much and is often sourced in your fics, but I really enjoyed reading that. Totally worth the wait!! Sexy & cute and all that's been mentioned above, plus, y'know, totally well-written and stuff. :x You make Naruto so much cooler than it actually is. Kuuuudooooos.

*goes to download that song*

[vazavati]

Oh, and, I forgot to mention this but I really wanted to--the reason it was so enjoyable, really, so had nothing to do with the sex and everything to do with how real you made the characters. XD ♥ I mean, honestly, I'm indebted to you--I loves the way you write Deidara, so matter of fact, and the dialogue feels so natural I can hear it. And that's just so much fun. It really is. I love reading about people who care about each other in a completely messy, completely honest way.

[inner_kyuubi]

jalfjasd;lafjas;

Emily. Your comments make me so happy I could cry. I'm always so afraid that I won't be able to convey in words just how real these characters are in my head, and...I guess I needn't have worried with this piece. XD

I don't even know what else to say. I'm beyond thrilled. I put the most of myself into my DeiTobi stories, I think, and the end result, especially when it touches other people, is so, so gratifying. ♥

[vazavati]

Well, yay. ♥ I'm pleased that I made you happy, huzzah. I'm super-exacting and anal-retentive when it comes to believing characters in fiction, particularly fanfiction, so it's not often I get to respond to something with just "Wow, that rocked and I wanna give everyone a hug." XD So it's gratifying for me, too.

I think the...what, reality? Believability? of characters is what I look for first & foremost while reading. I'm so disgustingly character-driven. Plot? What plot? I also ♥ and appreciate when authors such as yourself put so much of themselves into their writing; you can totally tell and it wins. The most delicious paragraphs are those infused with Effort & affection. :)

[starstruck2]

DGFHFGDHMSKHNSM!!!!

That's right. No vowels either.

This was AWESOME! I love, love, love the Deidara/Tobi interaction! And the individual characterizations were perfect too...great fic! <3<3

[inner_kyuubi]

HAHAHA, OH THE KEYMASH. ♥

Thank you! I don't know if I'll ever tire of writing these two...they're just so...rich, and they have so many facets, and...gaaaaaaah I love them. ♥