Crash

Jun 14, 2007 16:27

In retrospect, Deidara thought that a shower curtain would’ve solved all of his problems.

Well…maybe not all of his problems. He’d have to get rid of Tobi to do that. And forget he ever knew Tobi. Because if he got rid of Tobi while he still remembered him, he’d have new problems piled on top of the old ones, so really, it’d be easier to just ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 69

elict June 15 2007, 18:19:29 UTC
Uh... yeah. Yeah it had a similar effect on me.

Seme!Tobi is something completely new and yet... omg I could easily get addivted to him, at least if you write him, and especially if you write him like this.

Hoshit. And here I thought that an agressive Tobi would automatically be 100% out of character. Hm. I should've learned that your Deidara and your Tobi are never OOC ^^;

...I feel sorry for Deidara. I know how it feels to want to be able to put your art before everything, and then it just won't work that way, because that's not how the world - how humans - works...

Reply

inner_kyuubi June 16 2007, 21:23:12 UTC
SCORE. XD I'm glad you enjoyed it, my dear. ♥

Honey, I already am addicted to him. That longer fic I'm working on? You'll get to see this side of him a whole lot more. *grin*

I should've learned that your Deidara and your Tobi are never OOC ^^;

LAFLAJLASJFALS;JFAS;LFA ♥♥♥

Oh I know. *pets him* Poor baby. His heart is coming above his art, even though he resists it. That's life.

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

inner_kyuubi June 16 2007, 21:24:23 UTC
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! ♥

Awww, I love you too, and I'm glad I was able to make your day a bit brighter. XD

Thank you! ♥

Reply


wildwesternwind June 16 2007, 03:23:51 UTC
ok...so holy balls doesnt quite cover my reaction to this. HOLY TESTICLES seems more appropriate for some reason. Hmm..

Good lord that was insanely hott....and daaaaaaammmmmmnnnn Tobi, you do DeiDei like thaaaat. Seriously though...That was all sorts of awesome and I'd give a coherent review, but my brain cells melted at the absolute hawt of that. Big puddle of goo. And well, shower sex is hot to begin with..plus, we have the added benefit of being Vertical Sex. The Coalition For Vertical Sex (CFVS) is pleased.

This was well worth the wait..*major mem'age*

BTW...the song is all sorts of gorgeous.

Reply

inner_kyuubi June 16 2007, 21:26:14 UTC
Every time you write HOLY TESTICLES, it never fails to make me laugh, Beth. XDDDD

YES. PLEASE TOBI. DO WANT. 8D

Ehehehe! I'm glad! That was the effect I was shooting for. *evil grin* ♥

AND OF COURSE I AM PLEASED TO HAVE THE APPROVAL OF THE CFVS.

Yay! Thank you. ♥

ISN'T IT?? Ugh, I love Chris Daughtry. ♥

Reply

wildwesternwind June 16 2007, 23:50:00 UTC
It makes you laugh, and other people give me this look like "Lordy child, you be channeling satan."

Curse you and your knowledge of things that make us flail, even though we dearly love you for it.

Man do I need make a banner for the CFVS.

It is looooove. Man I needs more musics, cause his voice is gooorgeous!

O M G!! I had the cuuutest JuJu fic idea last night..and it had kittens.

Reply


shini_chii June 16 2007, 15:31:06 UTC
You, alñgindapignipgdngpiodag, this, ñlgdk nñpanpondaga -dies-.
You.did.seme!Tobi.and.it's.credible.
I think I love you. And seriously, when Deidara-sempai wonders if he'd die for his art or for Tobi? ♥♥♥♥♥ I died a little more.
I'm so looking for more DeiTobi fics now you converted me~~~ I mean, I liked them and all but... ♥♥♥♥♥♥

Reply

inner_kyuubi June 16 2007, 21:29:04 UTC
Omg. Extended keymashing with Spanish n things. I consider myself accomplished in light of that. ♥

YEAH?? ROCK ON!!! I was hoping people wouldn't be too thrown off by him, because I've always believed there's a side to him that he keeps to himself until the right moment comes along...XD

Awwwww. ♥ Poor Deidei and his dilemma.

EXCELLENT! I'm thrilled I've succeeded in converting you, and you can certainly expect more, because I doubt I'll tire of writing them any time soon. ♥♥♥

Reply


_acerbitas_ June 16 2007, 18:17:41 UTC
Woah, that was SO AWESOME! *squees and mumbles incoherent praises* I loved how cute and fluffy and adorable the whole thing was. :) I totally loved your story to smithereens. Tobi was SO CUTE and Deidara was grumpy but SO CUTE and it was perfect!

But....but....

“You’re gonna be the death of me…”

*cries*

Reply

inner_kyuubi June 16 2007, 21:30:47 UTC
Awww, thanks, Ariel! ♥ Like I said, I'm really pleased with how this turned out...but I was feeling particularly emotional when I wrote it, so I'm sure that helped. XD

*sniffle*

I know. ;___; MAYBE THEY'LL DIE TOGETHER, THOUGH.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up