Tin Man

Aug 26, 2007 22:14

It is amazing, really, how a phantom heart can hurt, can twist and churn and break in a cavern that houses nothing at all, nothing but emptiness.

You’re a Nobody. You don’t have a heart.

Fact undeniable. He yearns for a heart, yes; like the rest of his kind, he searches blindly for something, anything to make him feel human, to justify ( Read more... )

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sayaka_sama August 27 2007, 03:08:14 UTC
*WIBBLE*

*SNIFF*

Ashley, I'm going to cry and it's all your fault and... and- BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ;_______;

Angst aside, I really got a kick out of this part: So now, at least, Axel didn’t have to worry about getting brained by a supersonic copy of Catcher in the Rye for asking for a bar of soap. Roxas’s temper was often enough to contend with, let alone warp-speed Salinger.

Well. Holden Caulfield tends to get around, no? XDDD

LOVE IT. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. :D

*mem'dededed*

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inner_kyuubi August 28 2007, 12:13:34 UTC
HAHAHA. All I've been doing is wibbling and crying over this stupid pairing. ARGH. WHY MUST YOU BE SO TRAGIC, AKUROKU? WHY?

*snort* He does indeed. Holden's that kind of guy. :D

Seriously though, I'm so relieved I didn't mess this up. ♥ Thank you!!!!!

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Another one bites the dust ronsard August 27 2007, 03:18:00 UTC
I happily accept all the blame for this, and hope to continue my dastard villainy for similar results. Oh Ashley, this was all cool and collected, your style's totally clean and smooth like that Tin Battleaxe you referred to that sent me into a fit of glee. Roxas reads Salinger? That is... oddly sexy. I must be having a fever. A fever of love.

Yeah, so I'll keep whining at you until you write more, I'm glad we agree. Though in your case there's a bit of conflict of interest, as I hope this will no way impede the flow of Deidara/Muffin Man fic-ery that we've become accustomed to :(

Kick some ass at grad school <3

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Re: Another one bites the dust inner_kyuubi August 28 2007, 12:22:39 UTC
OH? IF THAT'S THE CASE, I BELIEVE THE UPDATING OF A CERTAIN STORY INVOLVING ONE ROSALINA OUGHT TO BE UPDATED POST HASTE. *cough* *hack*

alfjsf; Hearing that from you, a writer whose skill I admire to the point of starry-eyed incoherency, is like winning the Nobel Prize. ♥♥♥

ROXAS TOTALLY READS SALINGER. HE IS A SALINGER PERSON. I CAN FEEL IT.

I shall write more. Especially now that I have been shown full cut scenes from the game featuring our favorite duo. A fervor has filled me, oh yes.

Hahaha, don't worry. Started work on a new DeiTobi, from Tobi's perspective this time. IT BE ANGSTY.

I'll try. ^.^ It's gonna be a lot of work (I already have two week's-worth of stuff to finish and my first day was yesterday), but I'll get 'er done. Or something. 8D

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irishmastermind August 27 2007, 03:23:01 UTC
I liked it! I have zero familiarity with the characters, but I think you did a great job with it. I loved the connection drawn between these characters and the Tin Man.

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inner_kyuubi August 28 2007, 12:25:33 UTC
Eeee, thanks, Anne! ♥ When I learned that Nobodies don't have hearts, I immediately equated them to the Tin Man.

And dude. I got all of my information from wikipedia, fanfiction, and AMVs. 8D HOW PATHETIC. Gotta play the games alfjds

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inner_kyuubi August 28 2007, 12:34:49 UTC
YES. HE IS. And that was the first book that popped into my head when I tried to think of what he'd read. 8D (...omg. Omg. ALEX YOU H0R I WANT TO SEE THAT WRITTEN.)

Oh I know. I was having similar thoughts when the scene popped into my head. Yes, the Tin Man gets a "heart" but it's not a real heart, not his. It's the same for the Nobodies.

Axel's hair fascinates me. Seriously. I want to touch it (and strrrroke it, and peeeet it...)

alfjsalfjsafj *deliriously happy* I don't know about being one of the most talented, but I appreciate the sentiment. ♥

GIT IN MAH BELLAY, BITCH.

Grad school: *strangles*

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everyheart August 27 2007, 16:43:04 UTC
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DKSFNSBBGFHSDGGYUSBUBLDSGLFH. -keysmashtothemax-

YOU.

ARE.

...

-incoherent squeeing-

Why must all you people turn me to mush with your awesomeness? D8 It's impossible to even tell you've never played the game. GAH.

I don't have anything to say. 8D No crit. Just squee. And a hint of flail. Plus some wibble.

-hugz-

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inner_kyuubi August 28 2007, 12:37:07 UTC
Holy crap. Not one, but two keymashes.

That's gotta be a good sign. XDDDDD

It's impossible to even tell you've never played the game.

*EXPLODES*

Okay well. There be happy times in the Land of Ashley.

THANK YOUUUUUUU. ♥♥♥

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