Endymion

Sep 20, 2007 10:26

Seven hours since they arrived in this world, and Fai doesn’t even know what it looks like. If someone were to ask, he couldn’t describe its distinctions, what makes it unique from any other world he’s passed through, like a wraith.

His perspective is narrowed to an airy, open room with white walls, white ceiling, white floor, white bed, white ( Read more... )

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inner_kyuubi September 22 2007, 23:20:12 UTC
Oh wow. *is most definitely thrilled* Thank you for reading! ♥♥♥

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kenarbes September 20 2007, 18:17:29 UTC
This is a wonderful piece, in character. There's nothing I can add to what everybody else has said.

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inner_kyuubi September 22 2007, 23:21:24 UTC
Thank you so much. Really. I'm exceedingly relieved that my characterizations didn't crash and burn. XD

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rommipullo September 20 2007, 20:03:30 UTC
Oh god, this is so amazingly beautiful in every way. Much love to you for writing it. ♥

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inner_kyuubi September 22 2007, 23:22:11 UTC
*giddy with happiness*

Much love to you for reading it! Thank you. ♥

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baka_oni_ri September 20 2007, 20:26:46 UTC
girl, I almost cried.... SO BEAUTIFUL!!! I want the chapter to go this way!! *____*
My fav parts:
“Nicknames again?”
“The sword…”“I’ll get a new one.”“Your arm-”“Your eye.”
“Rather lose an arm than lose you, idiot,”
“Pick you up….when you fall…”
I swaer I will cry *O*

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inner_kyuubi September 22 2007, 23:23:30 UTC
Thank you! ♥

HAHAHA. I'm so lame, I did cry. *headdesk* (But holy rolling stone, did you see the spoilers? I'm like. Spazzing all over the place. GLEE.

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baka_oni_ri September 23 2007, 09:56:44 UTC
I didn't see them because I'm waiting for the chapter ^^' but considering how much I squeed after 166 it's possible I know how much I will squee now *_____* *hug*

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vazavati September 20 2007, 21:22:58 UTC
Ohhhhhhhh. ♥ I knew there was a reason I wanted to yank you into this fandom, yes. You write all the rich & sweet moments I'm too irreverent to manage, and this is totally how I want 166 to go. Your perception of Kurogane & Fai mirrors mine ever so clearly, so I am happy.

"You can't just go and buy another arm!" sounds so hilariously maternal. Time-out, Kuro-pii~:x

mmmmmmmm. Made my evening, this!

Now I totally have to finish my alternate!167 fic that involves both the prompts you gave me, and push all of the damned fragments together somehow.

Oh, and remind me to relay to you all of the various music I keep sticking onto Kuro/Fai without warning!

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inner_kyuubi September 22 2007, 23:26:56 UTC
Your perception of Kurogane & Fai mirrors mine ever so clearly, so I am happy.

REALLY? You have no idea how deliriously gleeful that makes me, Emily. For serious. ♥♥♥

FAI REALLY IS THE MOMMY IN THIS RELATIONSHIP, AFTER ALL. 8D

Omg yes. Post haste, pls. Because I am dying to know how you incorporated both prompts. alkfjs;

MUSIC. WANT.

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vazavati September 23 2007, 00:03:25 UTC
Fai's supposed to be Sakura & Syaoran's mummy, though, not Kurogane's. I guess it's a wifely thing to do, too, though. Like, fretting housewife sort of business. "Shame on you! *sniff*" God, now I'm picturing Fai in an old fifties-style apron. Bad! What an image--!

I'm glad that made you happy. that makes me happy. Oh, a swirly rainbow-colored thing of happiness! Or something.

♥♥♥♥

As soon as I'm done studying for Greek, I will totally get on finishing that. Chapter 167's actually made it easier, now I know what world they're in. mmmmmmmmmmmm. best...chapter...ever.

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