Seven hours since they arrived in this world, and Fai doesn’t even know what it looks like. If someone were to ask, he couldn’t describe its distinctions, what makes it unique from any other world he’s passed through, like a wraith.
His perspective is narrowed to an airy, open room with white walls, white ceiling, white floor, white bed, white
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THIS IS CHAPTER 167.
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Beautiful. True. Natural. Beautiful all over again. Can't say more than that.
Congratulations on your first Tsubasa fic, though! Hopefully it won't be your last ~ ;3
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Thank you so much. ♥ I'm glad I managed to write these two believably, because...I want to write more of them. XD
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That was so freaking phenomenal!!!! Please let it really happen!! >.< This is honestly perfect in every single way...
“It isn’t replaceable, Kurogane!”
“Neither are you.”
OMFG *dies of happy*
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Wow. Thank you. So much. ♥ But hey, in light of the 167 spoilers, I can totally handle CLAMP's canon. *____*
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*tears up, too* *hugs you* Thank you so much for this!! I really needed that after the angst feast of the last chapters. CLAMP sure as hell want to kill us all XD ♥
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*HUGS BACK*
AUGH. I know. I mean, I'm lucky that by the time I sat down to read Tsubasa, the Acid Tokyo arc was finished, and the Celes arc was just about there. I can't imagine having to sit through either of them week by week. X___x
Don't they always? XD
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But seriously. How do you write like that? Your style is so unique and beautiful.
I've run out of words. :D
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YES, YOU DO. Because there is some seriously good (albeit painful) stuff ahead of you. I got myself up to speed in about four days. XD
alfasjdflsa Again, thank you. ♥♥♥ I'm convinced I picked up a lot of my stylistic stuff from reading lots of books. 8D
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I have a problem with limited time on the computer. D: It sucks. Wow four days. XD Which site did you use?
I read lotsa books! *high five*
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Ash. You need to tell me about things like this, I don't normally watch my friend's writing journals!
This was... one of the best Tsubasa fics I've ever read. I don't even really know what to say, it just left me feeling hollow and dissatisfied and in the same time I wouldn't ever want it any other way.
The way you show us that Fye thinks about Kurogane as the center of their little family is just beautiful. I think that was the part that got to me the most, because it's so true. Sakura is the reason why they're all travelling together, and Fye is the one who makes them all get along, but it is Kurogane who is they one they'll all turn to and ask to protect them, in the end.
So yeah. I'll rec this one on my fanfic rec list, if you don't mind? It's way too good to be allowed to go by unnoticed (like it has been so far, in my case ;__;).
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