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Sep 30, 2007 14:01

“I…hate it…when you’re like this, un.”

“Oh?” Tobi leaned in and cupped Deidara’s cheek. “But I love it when you’re like this.” He moved his mouth down Deidara’s throat to his chest, where the thick, black stitches were. “I love that face you make.” He slid his tongue over the stitches, across the slit between them. “I want to immortalize it.”
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zaila September 30 2007, 21:38:33 UTC
*Melts into a little puddle of goo from THE SHEER HAWTNESS!!*

Nice work, sweetie. ;)

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inner_kyuubi September 30 2007, 22:56:34 UTC
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY.

Thank you, dahling. ♥

AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY I OWE YOU FIC WHAT DO YOU WANT.

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batgirl39 September 30 2007, 21:44:17 UTC
Muh gawd woman, I need a change of pants now.

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inner_kyuubi September 30 2007, 22:57:07 UTC
*PREENS*

Always happy to be of service, Ari. 8D

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irishmastermind October 1 2007, 01:03:20 UTC
Sharingan, sharingan. Always this fixation on the sharingan. You really are delicate, Deidara. It’d be so easy to break you.

I really, really like this line.

“We’ll destroy it,” he whispered. “That authority you hate so much. We’ll destroy it.”

Yeah, fuck the Man! lol

“I haven’t finished with you yet, senpai.”

Wah! Forceful, rough, mocking Tobi is so mind-blowing and awesome and twisty and dfjajdfjakldf!!!

Yaaay! This was hot and excellent and awesomely written!

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inner_kyuubi October 1 2007, 15:45:40 UTC
Deidara is made of glass, y'see. 8D

AHAHAHAHAHA. Dork. ♥

I seriously love mastermind!!!Tobi. Like, a lot. Oh God.

Thank you very much, m'dear! ♥♥♥

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ormery October 1 2007, 01:07:15 UTC
Yes please.

Coherency later.

<3

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inner_kyuubi October 1 2007, 15:50:46 UTC
♥♥♥!!!!

And here I thought you had completely lost interest in DeiTobi.

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mikutashi October 1 2007, 17:52:20 UTC
I THOUGHT SO TOO.

BRING SQUEAKY BACK INTO THE FANDOM.

Maybe she doesn't like DeiTobi, but TOBIDEI!

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ormery October 2 2007, 14:20:26 UTC
SEE BELOW

I never stopped liking DeiTobi/TobiDei/w/e D: I just got out of the habit. And I've always liked SasoDei moar.

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sadie_dandelion October 1 2007, 02:19:57 UTC
Holy freakin buckets of greatness! (read it twice)
This gave me the vibe that Deidara was selected for Akatsuki to also be a sex slave to Tobi. But he ambivalently enjoys it!
But, christ, Tobi was also mind-tripping poor DeiDei-- The last line just about made the whole story!
(I'm sorry, I love praising you). Just about anything good there is to say about this is running through my head~.

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inner_kyuubi October 1 2007, 15:54:24 UTC
Twice? Excellent! XD I feel highly accomplished. ♥

This gave me the vibe that Deidara was selected for Akatsuki to also be a sex slave to Tobi. But he ambivalently enjoys it!

*CHOKES*

DO NOT PUT IDEAS IN MY HEAD, WOMAN.

Tobi is, first and foremost, a manipulator. I think canon gives us ample evidence of that (i.e. his little charade as a space cadet). 8D

Thank you so much, seriously. ♥

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