Snickerdoodles

[inner_kyuubi]

“Kuro-tan.”

A grunt, which in Kurogane speak translates as “what do you want?”

“Open your mouth, please.”

Kurogane frowns, his expression similar to that of a temperamental bear-Fai knows better, of course (he may be a bear, but not the kind found in nature; no, he’s the kind you buy at the toy store to give to children). “Huh?”

Comments

[ari_raid]

"But Mokona would, obviously." Is the BEST LINE EVER (in context). I love tyhe thought process you gave Fai- very clever, and funny. You give him credit for the intelligence he obviously has, but you don't make him too serious- that wouldn't fit with the character. So great job, I love it!

[vazavati]

Your icon pwns me into next week. 8D omigosh. I died.

[inner_kyuubi]

AHAHAHA. Oh Mokona. ♥

Thank you very much! I...just had a blast with him. Fai is a lot of fun, particularly when he's not in ANGST MODE (your icon XDDDDDD), though he's fun to write then, too. 8D

[jlarinda]

Hee XD Such a cute fic~

There really ARE cookies named that? ._.;;

[inner_kyuubi]

Thank you! ♥

....

You've never had a snickerdoodle?? Oh honey. You have no idea what you're missing out on.

[vazavati]

...Ashleeeeeeeeeeeeeeey. ♥♥♥ Thank you!! Eeeee! So much cute! Oddly enough, I set my tea story in Outo, too, so now we're really having tea & cookies together in spirit~~I have to go finish that now, gosh.

To hell with Latin, I say. XD This was a-freakin'-dorable. It felt like it dropped right out of canon, what with the zany lightheartedness & all. And a welcome throwback to the happiest days of the series, too.

Sakura's line near the end reminded me of Himawari talking about Domeki & Watanuki. ;)

I looooooooooooooooved the last two lines. so much. ♥

In summary: A++! Would squee again!

[inner_kyuubi]

Emilaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. ♥♥♥ You're very, very welcome. 'Twas a pleasure, certainly. 8D

AHAHA, for serious? Now I'm even more excited, because I adore Outo Country.

I need to catch up in Holic.

HEHEHE. Kuro-chan really is a giant teddy bear, deep down. ♥

Omg your icon. TEA.

[kenarbes]

Awww, that was very nice.

[inner_kyuubi]

Thank you! ♥

[lunahonou]

omg!!

this is such a cute fic!
i lurve it >3

i laughed when Fai called Kurogane many names and Kurogane kept on saying "shut up" ,"stop" and "you.."

xDD
great fic *thumbs up*

[inner_kyuubi]

Thank you very much! XD ♥

AHAHA. That's one part of their relationship I love so much. The nicknames just kill me (hence my glee over chapter 167).