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inner_kyuubi

Push

Oct 13, 2007 17:39

“What do you want, Gokudera?”

They’re facing each other, breathing deep, nearly panting. He is up against a brick wall, part of some dilapidated old building (though most of their world is dilapidated and old-looking, these days), held in check by Gokudera’s smaller body-he’s never thought size mattered much, because how many times has ( Read more... )

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kiyoshi_mitarai October 13 2007, 23:53:22 UTC

ASBLSDGJ I FEEL LIKE THE MOST ACCOMPLISHED LITTLE SHITHEAD EVAR. Gaaah, here, take a Gon icon to compliment your Hisoka icon.

“I want to fuck you hard enough to kill you.” Oh man, Gokudera--so, so romantic there, haha. And I love how you wrote Yamamoto so patient and accepting and aldskfj your characterization isn't nearly as bad as you say, stfu plz. ♥ I LOVE YOU ASH OKAY KEEP WRITING OKAY ILU

But lulz, yeah. Every time I see Gokudera drawn sobbing and crying and boohoo Yama get your cock out of my ass I'm such a fragile little waifu, I just. Oh god, what the fuck, no.

inner_kyuubi October 15 2007, 17:38:27 UTC

OH SHUDDUP, YOU. ♥♥♥ SHAKE THAT ASS, GON. HISOKA APPROVES.

GOKUDERA IS THE EPITOME OF ROMANTIC. :D HE'S GOING TO SEND YAMAMOTO A BOUQUET OF DYNAMITE NEXT, TO PROVE HIS UNDYING DEVOTION. 8D

lafjs I LOVE YOU MORE. I'M HAPPY I DIDN'T FAIL HARD CORE. :D (I want to write Ryohei...)

*giggles hysterically for a good five minutes* Fragile little waifu...omfg. XD *dead*

you should know who this is D: sunday_extreme October 16 2007, 02:35:53 UTC

WATCHU GONNA DO WITH ALL THAT JUNK/lol kill me now

YAMAMOTO WILL LOVE IT! WHAT A FUN GUY! Though I doubt that he'd understand the inner, deeper meanings of love materialized as a batch of lit fireworks. Gokudera is deep like Shakespeare.

I LOVE YOU MORE THAN MORE. D< (........DO IT. PLEASE. What pairing, if any? XDD)

jadeprince October 14 2007, 01:09:28 UTC

Oh my god, this is amazing. _EXACTLY how I see it going between them.

And what's so crazy is that it could totally be a prequel to a fic I just wrote. The character of each is such a dead on match. *laughs*

I'll look forward to more from you!!

inner_kyuubi October 15 2007, 17:40:11 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥ I'm...totally relieved I didn't fob it up. XD

For serious? Do you have a link? I'd love to read it! Especially since it seems like we're on the same page as far as these two are concerned. ♥

jadeprince October 15 2007, 17:46:47 UTC

I'm working on getting a new fic journal up at the moment to house all the bajillions of Reborn fanfic I (and my writing partner) have done since we got into the series.

I'll definitely link you there when it's up!

And no, no, you totally didn't fob it up. At least as far as I'm concerned, this is how their relationship could be the most canon/in character. Kudos! I hope you write more!

jadeprince October 17 2007, 03:40:17 UTC

http://scuttlebuttincx.livejournal.com/1625.html

*psst* It's not officially open yet, and the NC-17 stuff is under f-lock, but if you wanna read that fic I mentioned, it's at the link above. :3

opplepie October 14 2007, 07:32:59 UTC

GUH. It's hard for me to see Goku topping anyone ever but this is perfect! The interaction is very IC and. and Yamamoto's so patient and accomodating... T___T ♥ (he's also totally topping from the bottom).

inner_kyuubi October 15 2007, 17:42:35 UTC

Really? I was actually kinda flummoxed by the amount of uke!!Gokudera doujins I've found, since...he just never struck me as a perpetual uke type, despite how dorky he is about Tsuna. XD

But thank you very much! ♥ I'm glad the characterizations worked, since I was half-convinced they wouldn't. XD (You betcha. But Gokudera doesn't need to know that. ♥)

opplepie October 16 2007, 05:05:59 UTC

Haha. When you take into consideration the cast of Reborn who are mostly more seme than Gokudera if not ultimate semes... The only people I can imagine Goku topping in canon are the girls, TYL!Lambo, and Tsuna, the last only when he's not in dying will mode or TYL (because Don Tsuna tops everyone). Even with Tsuna he'd be like, "Tenth! Am I hurting you, Tenth? I'm so sorry Tenth!" which isn't all that dominating. XD

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inner_kyuubi October 15 2007, 17:44:29 UTC

*experiences a brief moment of HOLY CRAP, IT'S KUROT*

Sorry. XD I'm sure you get that a lot. But your artwork is just so lovely. *___*

Hahaha, and thank you! ♥ I'm glad you approve. ^.^

threesteps November 15 2007, 22:04:29 UTC

Oh, man. That was NICE. I really loved the way you portrayed Gokudera, especially. I like the idea of cute, embarrassed Gokudera, but if people want to write serious Yama/Goku fanfiction, he needs to be angry and frustrated - frustrated enough to blow a building up [with or without explosives]. So - awesome. Keep it up [please :D]! ♥