On the Subject of Faith

[inner_kyuubi]

Normally, when he’d walk inside the café on the corner of West Grover Street, the little bell rigged above the door would precede his entrance-and every time, without fail, he’d tell the establishment’s overly cheerful proprietor just what he thought of that damn bell (“Don’t you get tired of listening to it? Annoying as fuck…”).

Today,

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[vazavati]

...awwwwwwwwwwwwww. ♥

Just--

--alskjdkla--

--:/ :( &hearts~~

....everybody say it with me: Awwwwwwwwww! D:

Hidan's dialogue totally rocks. Several lines made me grin to myself, which is saying something, since my lips are so chapped right now it hurts like effin' hell. XD Can totally relate to Hidan's affliction, come to think of it. And--yeah, this was just adorable. For the win. Tobi ups the cute factor of anything by like eighty billion percent.

[dayadhvam_triad]

“It’s the principle of the thing, Hidan,” he’d explained once, gravely. “The spoon goes with the fork, and the fork goes with the knife. They’ve gotta be together, see?”

No, as a matter of fact, he didn’t. Hard to summon up concern over the supposed separation anxiety of inanimate objects.

XD

There's something incredibly cute about the fic. :D Tobi's view of God and the relation with humans fits his pre-GREAT BIG REVELATION personality very well, although I'm a little surprised Hidan hasn't been more vocal with his profanities. :P But seriously, Tobi SO AWESOME. And Hidan was awesomely snarky as always. :D

[lazynin]

I loooove how you took the personalities from Last Stop~~ *__* So cuteeee.

I love/d it~~! ♥

[sayaka_sama]

ASH.

YOU HAVE, LIKE. SINGLEHANDEDLY REDUCED MY SHITASTIC WEEK TO NOTHING. :DDDDDDD

I seriously want to hug you right now. Just.... ugh. Tobi getting into a conversation about faith and Hidan being awkwardly contemplative (and sick XD) and the diner and the MARSHMALLOWS. ASH, I FIND NO FAULT IN THIS AT ALL.

AND- AND- *points finger*

“And it works two ways. If man has faith in God, doesn’t it stand to reason that God has faith in man?”

Hidan lowered his hands in disbelief. Where did this guy come from? Where did he get his ideas?

“If. That’s the kicker, seriously. If man has faith in God. If man gets man’s head out of man’s ass long enough to serve something other than man.”

Tobi raised his eyebrows in acquiescence. “Like I said, either you have faith, or you don’t.”

AJKSHFKHFDGHFDGHHGYTGTYSFJKGJDFLHGTYGTYGTYG ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Spiritual conversations for the win.

I love you so very very very much, and thank you for making me feel better, in more ways than one. ♥ *mem'd*

[infinitefirefly]

Okay, you know what honestly shows that I love a piece of writing?

When I skim nothing.

I read every single word, because none were wasted and every single one had meaning to add to the fic. And the FIC ITSELF OH MAN~ ♥

It's like...like the hot chocolate you described. Deep, rich, sweet, and warm. You get the casual nature of the cafe but some serious spiritual contemplation inside it, and it just...has this perfect balance that's so reflective of real life.

That, and your characterizations are always full of win. ♥ OMFG YOU MENTIONED HIDAN'S MOTHER LAKGN;AEQGA;QEGOQAEG; You wrote him so well, and Tobi was just perfect. I loved it.

After this, I realized how much I missed your writing. :D