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Cinderella (I): A Frakked-Up Fairy Tale

May 25, 2009 13:10

Title: Cinderella: Once Upon A Time
Author: innibis
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,744
Pairing: Kara/Lee, Kara/Sam
Genre: Completely AU
Disclaimer: I am not RDM or any of his cohorts. I do not lay claim to BSG in any way, shape or form; especially the finale.

A/N: Thanks, as always to the charming workerbee73 who can turn rags into ball gowns without breaking a nail ( Read more... )

fairytale, bsgfic, kara/lee

Comments 10

rayruz May 25 2009, 20:19:59 UTC

I can't get around to reading the whole thing right now but I totally love this one so far!

Kara nudged his shoulder. "Say it."

Lee rolled his eyes. "Confirm three down and locked, call the ball,"

Kara cackled. "Roger, three down and locked. I have the ball,"

I'm giggling like a crazy person over here.

innibis May 25 2009, 20:51:10 UTC

*g* Thanks. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

I mixed it up a lot for this one. And I couldn't resist the pilot!coms banter, so I'm glad it made you laugh.:)

Woohoo oracle42 May 26 2009, 01:05:58 UTC

I check into LJ for some fic and not only is there buts it's Lee/Kara BSG fic. Life is good!

Reading about Lee and Kara hanging out always puts the goofiest smile on my face.

Re: Woohoo innibis May 26 2009, 01:53:14 UTC

Aww, thanks!

They are fun when they're just hanging out and having fun.

isla_verdad June 30 2009, 01:12:43 UTC

How did I miss this one? I jumped straight from Rapunzel to the Six Swans, so this is an unexpected treat. I'm glad that you worked Lee bartending into one of your fics, it's nice to see him living his dream, even if it is in an AU story. ;) Off to read Chapter 2 now, yay!

innibis June 30 2009, 02:28:00 UTC

I am glad you found it.:) This one's my baby, I really wanted them to be happy and healthy.

cynicalshadows December 14 2009, 07:09:49 UTC

The little snippet of pilot comm banter before they entered the bar was hilarious, and I am just loving how frakking adorable the Kara/Lee friendship is in this.

innibis December 14 2009, 14:07:04 UTC

Thank you.

My favorite thing about K/L is their friendship, so it was fun to let them have a relatively easy connection without the tragedy of Zak coloring everything they do.

winegums August 23 2011, 20:50:59 UTC

oooof, pilots being pilots but without the end of the world. And they're STILL dancing around each other! I really, really like the way you've written Lee and Kara as friends, happy Zak, and the bar (fits very nicely with Jamie himself saying that if Lee wasn't a Viper pilot, he'd probably open a bar).

innibis August 24 2011, 03:13:06 UTC

I like their friendship best of all, so it was fun to make that such a focus. I'm glad yoiu liked them and Zak. I'm a big fan of the Zak who exists only in my head. :) Thank you for the comment.