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Six Swans: A Frakked-Up Fairy Tale

Jun 28, 2009 19:05

Title: Six Swans (3/3)
Author: innibis
Rating: R
Word Count: 7,792
Pairing: Kara/Lee, Karl/Sharon
Genre: Completely AU
Disclaimer: I am not RDM. Nor am I a brother of the Grimms.

A/N: Many thanks to my beta, workerbee73, smoother of ruffled feathers.

Part I
Part II

( Six Swans )

fairytale, bsgfic, kara/lee

Comments 43

elzed June 28 2009, 23:34:36 UTC

AAwwwwwwww!

*flails*

Another fab rewrite, innibis! And I adore how your fairytales have Lee and Kara taking turns at saving each other, as it were...

Of course her first, croaky word would be Lee...

Thank you for a great tale, dearest.

innibis June 29 2009, 00:32:12 UTC

And thank you for commenting. I'm really happy that you like it.:)

I like having them behave as the equals that they are, it wouldn't seem right if one was always saving the other. And her first word definitely had to be Lee.:)

nocturnalista June 29 2009, 00:08:38 UTC

Lurker here. Your fairy tales are sweet, excellent fun and I love reading them. I had to laugh out loud at Leoben flapping his wing-arm for pity. I never liked that guy.

innibis June 29 2009, 00:36:23 UTC

*g*

I don't like Leoben either.

Thank you for commenting, that was a really nice thing to say. Delurk more often.:)

fishnet_fae June 29 2009, 00:23:53 UTC

Love, love, love your stories.

innibis June 29 2009, 00:36:55 UTC

Thank you so much.:)

ourmutualfiend June 29 2009, 01:57:08 UTC

I was hoping for this- what a great thing to come home to.

innibis June 29 2009, 02:09:13 UTC

Always glad to be of service.

ourmutualfiend June 29 2009, 02:14:56 UTC

Abd I haven't even started yet! I had to some sustenance first.

ourmutualfiend June 29 2009, 02:44:04 UTC

"The plodding routine punctuated by short stabs of color and joy sharp enough to wound."

It's so beautiful. I want to read it again and again and find some new bit that I may have missed the first time.

Lee and his duty. Action Kara. They are just so finely rendered- both interesting characters within the context of the tale and AU-verse, but still so recognizably Lee and Kara.

I love it and think it wonderful. You are a gifted writer.

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ds888 June 29 2009, 01:58:42 UTC

Can I just tell you that I have the deepest admiration for your work? The details that you weave in are simply incredible. This was simply a wondrously joyful piece to read.

innibis June 29 2009, 02:10:12 UTC

Thank you so much. What a kind thing to say. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.:)