Toxic

[innocentculprit]

Title: Toxic
Author: innocent culprit aka solosundance 
Genre/Rating:  Gen, PG-13 for language
Wordcount: 7,066
Characters:  Sam, Dean, Bobby
Disclaimer:  Not mine

Summary:  Sam and Bobby stand guard against an attack while a very sick Dean doesn’t help one little bit

A/N:  For the hoodie_time  Dean-centric h/c meme and to prompt 36:  Gen fic. Sam and Dean. Bobby can be in

Comments

[izzie7]

This was good. I especially liked Dean's ramblings, and you built up the tension nicely with everything trying to get to Dean.

[innocentculprit]

Thanks, izzie! I do like to make Dean ramble :)

[callistosh65]

Wonderful. No one sends Dean out of his gourd quite like you - or should I say, sends the Boot Fairy ( I *love* that little detail:). A great premise - really icky - and it lent a great sense of drama and urgency to Dean being out of it. The final scene with Bobby and Sam pointing guns at a rattling door, lights flickering..? Terrific, petal. Just terrific.

[innocentculprit]

out of his gourd ... I love that expression *g* And he does seem to lend himself to talking crazy ...

[kjfri]

Very cool. As in - awesome work! Loved it from beginning to end. Thank you!

[innocentculprit]

Thank you, glad you liked!

[embroiderama]

Oh man, you really put Dean through it here! The details were really scary and gross, and yay for Bobby knowing what was going on. :)

[innocentculprit]

Always yay for Bobby :)

[marlowe78]

This was really good. The poor guy, throwing up is so unpleasant and throwing up stuff like you made him do... yikes.
I like this quite a lot, especially the rambling and the fact that Dean doesn't really remember anything but the morning after the fight (or the night of?) and he still only thinks that Sam did good.
Cool story.

[innocentculprit]

he still only thinks that Sam did good .. whatever happens, Sam's always at the front of his mind :) Thanks for reading!