Never To Betray You Again - Chapter 20

[inoo_hime]

Title: Never To Betray You Again Chapter 20
Disclaimer: I didn't own anything except for the plot
Main Character: Yabu, Inoo, Yaotome, Arioka, Yuya, Yamada, Chinen
Genre: romance, mystery, friendship, thriller and death
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kota locked himself to the world for 3 years and he even have times that he wanted to die already but he

Comments

[dean_itoh]

Oh, please
You HAVE TO continue this
Not when I just found this in my super boring holiday

I love this
And will wait for the next chapter unpatiently

[inoo_hime]

I will continue this but i can't give you any updates yet as of this moment. I didn't write anything yet because i am still busy with something and also i am just plotting the drafts for the next parts. You know since this is a mystery type of fic there are lots of things to be consider so everything will be connected properly.

i am glad that you enjoyed reading this fic. I will do my best to provide you more just wait patiently okay?

[juju905rote]

Oh wow! So much suspense and mystery!
I can't figure out who the mystery caller is and can't wait to find out what happens next.

[inoo_hime]

thanks for the comment, i am happy to read oneXD

This fic focus on those stuffs... mystery and suspense and i hope i am executing them well. Clues for who is the 'caller' will be seen in the next few chapters and i hope it will help you to guess who really 'caller' is.

[jyj4everfan]

I'm sorry for this late comment haha. I was on vacation when you posted this and for some reason I forgot about this update ;A; So I could only read it now ><

Anyway, it's so sad that Kota wasn't able to save Kanata. I can understand why he would want to kill himself after that. Thank goodness Inoo came on time before that could happen T^T So I guess I understand now why the caller was making Kota suffer. It's because the caller thought it was Kota who told the management about the drugs but the blazerz members blamed Sakura for it (because Kota framed her)? Well, I guess if Kota didn't frame Sakura in the first place then that thing wouldn't have happen but then, it's not like it was Kota's fault. It's not like he knew that his mistake would result to Sakura's death >If Hikaru just told someone his own feelings like his side of the story then I'm sure someone would be able to understand him. Because all he did was blame Kota that of course people who knew both of them are going to side with Kota because they know what kind of person

[jyj4everfan]

Omg I think I just wrote an essay XDD I'm sorry I didn't think it would be this long lol ;A;

[inoo_hime]

Like always you have a long comment but like always i said that i love this kind of commentsXD

Don't worry i don't have any plan on dropping this fic. Actually i am doing some plotting of the story on my notebook, i am already around the 3/4th part and near to the climax already. I have everything on my head but i need to write them so that i can't forget. After that I'm going to start writing the next chapters after Chapter 20 and because of that it will take me long time to post for updates since i need to check everything first (check that everything that happened on each chapter are all connected properly and so that i didn't miss any important details) before i post them. Writing mystery type is really complicated because you can't just drop everything in one go... you know you need to do some teasing so that readers will feel more thrill in reading hehe.

Anyway i am glad that you are understanding the story the way i want to execute it. Maybe i am doing a good job on this LOL >__< Kota's situation is really a disaster... i

[jyj4everfan]

Yeah you're right, writing this kind of fic really takes time. I actually really admire all mystery writers because I know I wouldn't be able to write one haha. And I know it's hard to write one because like you said, you really have to plan out how you're going to work out the story since just one simple mistake can ruin the flow of the story. So I actually understand if you will not be able to update this fast. Don't worry, like I said before, I'm good at waiting haha^^ And yes what's good about mystery if there's no tease? XDD You need to make your reader feel excitement about what's going to happen next and of course, it would be even better if there's some plot twist in the story haha. I love plot twist XDD

Thanks for adding me btw^^ I don't usually ask people to add me here in livejournal because I kind of feel shy and I feel like I'm annoying them XDD