Never To Betray You Again - Chapter 23

[inoo_hime]

Title: Never To Betray You Again Chapter 23
Disclaimer: I didn't own anything except for the plot
Main Character: Yabu, Inoo, Yaotome, Arioka, Yuya, Yamada, Chinen
Genre: romance, mystery, friendship, thriller and death
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kota locked himself to the world for 3 years and he even have times that he wanted to die already but he

Comments

[juju905rote]

Oh you updated again!! So soon! And the suspense just keeps growing. I really hope this story will have a happy ending(please), at least for Kei and Kota. They deserve it after all they went through.
I hope the caller isn't anyone from HSJ...and I hope Kei can help Kota and Hikaru reconcile their broken friendship.
Thanks for the update!:)

[inoo_hime]

Yup i plan to update randomly. I have my target date to finish this fanfic which is in June so expect that i post updates as long as i am not busy so just always check on my journal for it.

i am also thinking about Kei and Kota's relationship but actually i already have a plan for them. Do you have any guess who the 'caller' is?

[juju905rote]

Ok~ I'll keep waiting for your updates and look forward to the ending! I hope that Kota and Kei will learn each other's feelings at least. I'm kind of worried that this time, Kota will sacrifice his life for Kei to pay for his past betrayal, but I'm sure whatever ending you have will be the best.

I still have no idea who the caller is...it would be kind of shocking if it was Ono all along, or someone innocent looking like Daiki (since he knows Kota's secret) getting revenge for Kei, or even Chinen.

[mikotollsmile]

I'm so curious about the caller ;w;
But I think it's daiki but maybe it's not him xD
I feel sad for Kota ;A; Hikaru needs to listen to him ;A;
Anyways I really liked the update!
Thanks for the update!!

Haya.

[inoo_hime]

Nice guess for the 'caller' but it seems like you're not sure yet about your answer hehe... I know it's still hard to guess the 'caller' up to this chapter since there are still few hints/clues that is pointing who the mystery guy is but i guess that made the story more exciting? i hope so...

i am glad you like the update... and expect for random updates again.

[jyj4everfan]

Thank you so much for updating :3 I was actually about to read chapter 21 when I saw that you updated 2 chapters. That made me happy tbh haha :D

Anyway, why can't Kei and Kota just be honest with their feelings? And Hikaru too >< If they're not honest with each other, it will just create more misunderstanding :(

Until now, I still have no idea who the caller is and who the traitor is >< haha. I do have like 2 people in mind though (for who the caller is) XD But it might not be any one of them since I'm bad at guessing or looking for clues lol

Of course, I want this fic to have a happy ending especially for Kota since he needs to be happy. I mean he deserves to be happy after all :) But if someday you realize that sad ending will fit more with this story then that's fine too. Even though that might make me cry a lot ;A; And don't worry, I don't think the story is confusing or anything, it's actually getting more exciting haha :3

[inoo_hime]

Yup... from now on expect random updates. I set myself a deadline to finish this fanfic to motivate me in writing it more. I am glad that the story is not confusing up to this point... i am just worried that the readers were having a hard time understanding it. i am not really good at narration anyway and i am afraid that i making things complicated because of the way i execute my plot specially that there are lots of things happening in the story.

Who is your guess for the 'caller'? Just tell me but of course i will not confirm if it is... i just wanted to know what is the readers thinking up to this point, about their idea who is the 'caller'.

[jyj4everfan]

Then I'll look forward for your random updates haha :3

Actually, I'm thinking the caller was either Yuya or Chinen. I know that was random XDD Don't ask me why I thought of them. I don't know why too XDDD But Yuya was actually my first guess. I just thought he was suspicious from the earliest chapter but then Chinen became suspicious too so I have no idea now >< But then, it might be Daiki too since he knew what happened to Sakura (besides Kei). Well, I'm actually suspicious with everyone anyway so~ XD And for the traitor, maybe it was Ono since he was being too nice lol

I'm just thinking, since Sakura looked like she doesn't have any friends, I feel like the one taking revenge for her is a family? haha I don't know what I'm talking about anymore XD I'm just making up my own plot here lol

[a_mashihita]

I have one in my mind since the previous one. I won't tell you, but I still think that he is the 'caller'. It's very unexpected one.
I don't know, something mysterious about 'him' from the very beginning of the story, especially in the previous one.

Love this
and
Hope you will give everyone a happy ending ...