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Never To Betray You Again - Chapter 29

Mar 16, 2015 13:53

Title: Never To Betray You Again Chapter 29
Disclaimer: I didn't own anything except for the plot
Main Character: Yabu, Inoo, Yaotome, Arioka, Yuya, Yamada, Chinen
Genre: romance, mystery, friendship, thriller and death
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kota locked himself to the world for 3 years and he even have times that he wanted to die already but he ( Read more... )

pairing: yabunoo, chaptered: never to betray you again

Comments 4

sayukino11 March 16 2015, 08:05:59 UTC

i'll wait fpr the update!!!! XD

otsukare~

inoo_hime March 16 2015, 09:34:08 UTC

Thank youXD

juju905rote March 16 2015, 09:06:35 UTC

Oh my goodness, I was holding my breath while reading the last part and pleading with Kota to come save Kei right now! Thank goodness Kei is safe...and Yuto finally appears. I read the old version of this story, and he was Kota's boyfriend there, so I wonder what role he has in this story. And I hope Kota can come back soon...

inoo_hime March 16 2015, 09:40:44 UTC

now that you mention i forgot i have Yuto as Kota's boyfriend on the old version. I am not checking the original version while writing this revision. I just thought that ahhh... everyone in JUMP except Yuto is here so i decided to give him a role. Oh well i am glad you appreciate that scene. I revised that part so many times thinking of how i will make the tension up... you know it's the moment where Kei was finally seen by one of the Blazerz. One of those few moments that readers and me of course was anticipating so much.

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