(Berserk) WIP

Jun 26, 2008 18:04

Guts had lost track of himself as he stared at the irregular patterns of the dungeon walls. Flame still flickered on the stone, catching Griffith's hair until it was gold-hued. Sometimes after they'd fucked, Guts would keep the metallic strands and play with them, winding them around his index finger or tossing them in the air only to watch them ( Read more... )

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tl__dr June 27 2008, 02:20:50 UTC
So I'll like leave you edit-y thoughts later sometime alright but for right now i just want to reiterate how FUCKING MUCH i FUCKING LOVE the FUCKING WAY you write these FUCKING CHARACTERS FUCKING EACH OTHER. sajkdfsjadfs mindi

"You like me inside of you, don't you, Guts? You want it so much that you hold your breath every time. Maybe I should just leave you here," Griffith worked a second finger inside of him. "Maybe I should just put a ring on you and walk away. Will you admit that you want me then? When you're so consumed with lust that I could shove anything inside of you and make you come?"

dkajsdjfadfa mindi mindi the concept of griffith trying to force guts to just admit he wants him and it's obvious to everyone there but guts is a manly man and won't ever say it god it's just akdjfajsdfadsfadfdfsasa right and then

Guts' head was spinning when Griffith stood up and forced him down for a kiss, sharing the taste of Guts' come with him. Griffith's tongue slid along his, sharing the proof of Guts' lust and Guts tilted his head ( ... )

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inoverflow June 28 2008, 04:14:36 UTC
ILU SO MUCH, BB. IDK, I'VE NEVER REALLY WRITTEN STRAIGHT OUT PORN BUT I ENJOY WRITING IT FOR YOU BECAUSE WE HAVE SUCH SIMILAR TASTES AND WELL, ILU, THAT'S ALL. ♥

gdh;aghd;ah; I DON'T KNOW WHAT THE NEXT PART WOULD BE. I KIND OF THINK I'M JUST BEING REALLY REPETITIVE SO IDK. HOPEFULLY INSPIRATION WILL STRIKE.

BUT I THINK I MIGHT HAVE TO DO SOME RE-READING IN ORDER TO WRITE A STORY BASED ON MY LITTLE PRINCE AND THE KINGMAKER IDEA. YES.

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