In and out of the crowd like a glance...

[insaneteacup]

A waltz for the girl out of reach
She lifts her hands up to the sky
She moves with the music
The song is her lover
The melody's making her cry...

- So She Dances by Josh Groban

Title: Ballade Pour Deux (in three parts) 
Prompt: Duet
Rating: M  
Character/Pairing: LenxKaho
Summary: The feel of skin on naked skin, the escalating heat generated by

Comments

[annalisemarie99]

plus de, s'il vous plait? This is fantastic work! Keep it up!! :D

This is making it to ff.net, I fervently hope??

[insaneteacup]

Mais bien sur! ^^ I'm posting works here that haven't undergone too much editing or haven't been beta-ed yet.

Once they're polished, I'll publish them over at ff.net. (Not that they'll ever really be finished getting edited... >.> I shall forever be tweaking these things. -.-;;)

[annalisemarie99]

Hah, I know what you mean about editing. Sera-chan of ff.net so kindly reviewed and left me pointers on the grammar on every chapter of my chapter-ed fic when I asked her to specifically point them out so that I would rectify them in a flash, but that flash never came, and whenever the word editing comes up, I am always excusing myself with laziness.

That doesn't apply to everyone, of course, but my point is, once you start editing, you start scrutinizing and the editing process never ends. I would say post it as it is. There aren't any noticiable grammar mistakes I observed, but should I notice any, I will let you know for ease of editing, ok? :)

[insaneteacup]

Thanks! That'll be completely awesome. I've got Skylilies as my beta, but it wouldn't hurt to have an extra eye. (Don't hold back on your punches. ;P)

I'd still rather wait until I've got the full one-shot finished and have Sky approve it before posting it on FF.net, though. Slap my arm and call me Gary, but that's how I prefer it. At least this way, I can get you guys' feedback and make necessary changes before publishing it. :)

MORE PLEASE!!!!

[anonymous]

Skylilies here....and OMG this is awesome! (again, with the absolutely perfect rendition of Len- how do you do it?!!)

That doesn't mean I don't love how you write Kahoko, I really do, she's perfect, it's just that I've always found Len the harder character to pin down. Please, please write more of this!!!