Fic: How Much I'd Miss You

[insanityclings]

*sighs* So obviously I didn't make my deadline :( but I did manage to do more than an icon this time, in fact the fic grew beyond what I expected

Comments

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, that hurt my heart a little (a lot).

I love the sweetness in the beginning and how he didn't want to let her out of bed. The banter over coffee was cute. The second part where the smell of coffee woke him up and he thought it wasn't right that it existed without her...*cries*

Great job.

[insanityclings]

*hugs* I'm sorry it hurt your heart so much.

Thanks. I'm really glad you like the beginning though, because I think the second part makes more of an emotional impact with them so happy in the first part.

[sarcastic_bite]

Beautiful descriptions, and I love the easy morning loving mood at the beginning.Perfect one-shot.

[insanityclings]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the morning scene because I certainly enjoyed writing it and letting them have a moment of happiness.

[nienna87]

Beautiful :) and so sad at the same time. I just want to cry for him. Well done!

[insanityclings]

Thanks. I know, Ollie loves her so much that it's just devastating for him that she's gone. I'm glad you like and I hope I've managed to do justice to the current storyline.