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Closing Walls and Ticking Clocks [diva_off version]

Sep 29, 2010 13:55

TITLE: closing walls and ticking clocks
RATING: PG
WARNINGS: None
CHARACTERS/PAIRINGS: Jesse, Jesse/Rachel, Finn/Rachel
PROMPTS USED: #3) Alarm Clock

( and he thinks, maybe this is his second chance )

rating: k, round two, diva_off, ship: jesse/rachel, fic: glee

Comments 3

ruby_slippers62 September 30 2010, 02:12:44 UTC

Yay! I've read this before, but this version is definitely better due to editing.

I love the clock idea. And that Jesse is of course more dramatic when he's upset. He and Rachel are so a like. <3

Off to read the next part. :)

budgrl8 September 30 2010, 05:13:46 UTC

You know what I think I love most about this, is that yes Jesse is going on with his life out in LA, but he's still thinking about Rachel. I would love for something like this to happen on the show especially Jesse being at Nationals and reconnecting with a very single Rachel Berry. :)

Oh, and I love the clock. I could see Jesse being sentimental enough to keep something like that, but not let anyone know who gave it to him and why he has it.

insanitygenius September 30 2010, 06:01:44 UTC

A single Rachel+a single Jesse=win.

Thank you for taking the time to review! I know a lot of people-and I'm one of them-usually just read and move on. I'm trying to be better about that.