closing walls and ticking clocks [full version]

[insanitygenius]

Title: closing walls and ticking clocks
Rating: K
Character/Pairings: Jesse, Jesse/Rachel, mild Finn/Rachel
Spoilers: Up to 1.22, Journey
Summary: UCLA has everything Jesse St. James ever wanted. That is, other than one tiny brunette he left back in Ohio.

Comments

[insanitygenius]

Thank you. :) I'm thinking about writing a Rachel piece to accompany it.

[ruby_slippers62]

Ah, I thought this was the Rachel part we talked about. But this was lovely. I loved the moment in the CD store. I think it's the best scene actually. You really capture it in such detail that it was easy to picture in my mind. <3

Now write that Rachel part!:P I want to read JR fic now. lmao.

[insanitygenius]

Lol when I saw your comment for the other one, I thought, wait. Does she know this is just a longer version? Obviously not. :P

That one should come in due time. I'm currently working on a Cruel Intentions piece for when I (hopefully) enter reel_glee.

[ruby_slippers62]

Awwww your icon!

Okay, that had nothing to do with your fic....I just had to say it.

Cruel Intentions? With Rachel as Katheryne?

[insanitygenius]

Oh Lord no, that would not work. Kathryn is deliberately malicious and cruel. Plus, to write Jesse falling out of love with Rachel would just be depressing. No, she's Annette.

I'm doing it as a relatively faithful adaptation, at least in the beginning. It will branch out come the middle. It's going to be so long. I'm only to the part where they read her manifesto in the magazine, and it's two pages front and back.

[budgrl8]

I left a comment on the shorter version of this, but my favorite bit is in this one.

What he wishes were real: She misses him as much as he misses her. She wants to see him as much as he wants to see her.

I want that too so badly.

[insanitygenius]

Me too!

No more FR. -.-

[cutepoison89]

Looove it, you write Jesse so well! The ending with the Hell-o shout out is perfect! <3

[nesza]

this is lovely. I love how the story progressed and the ending where it didn't go to full blown romance, just a hint of a second chance. Please write more jesse/rachel fics!