As Long As You're Alive (1/1)

Apr 11, 2010 22:24

Someone is screaming, he can hear it but he can’t see it. He can’t move, there is a darkness eating at the corner of his vision. He is peaceful, the water is cool against his skin and the bathroom is dark. He can’t see past the surface of the water, he chokes and pulls up for breath. He chokes on the new air and struggles in the bath for a few ( Read more... )

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fallout_sweetie April 11 2010, 22:26:27 UTC
i really liked this :D and you did a really good job

there was something really sad about it but the way it ended made me feel like everything was going to be okay but anyways really good job :D

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insanitywhore April 11 2010, 22:28:21 UTC
XD Thank you.

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fall_out_nurse April 12 2010, 00:58:10 UTC
I loved this it was heartbreaking and amazing all at the same time.

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insanitywhore April 18 2010, 15:30:00 UTC
Thank you! :)

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ashleyslash April 23 2010, 01:33:15 UTC
it's sad but cute, cute because you can tell patrick really cares for pete.
i enjoyed it =]

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