[Gazette] Allegory (1/1)

Sep 27, 2007 00:54

Title: Allegory
Genre: Comedy
Rating: G
Warning: May come off unintentionally ramble-filled and pointless.
Characters: Reita & Uruha
Synopsis: What friends are for.
Comments: First friendship fic. I got the idea for this when I remembered, out of the blue, a message I received so many months ago. Kindly take into account the warning above just in ( Read more... )

reita, ficlet, friendship fic, gazette, uruha

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eatyou_alive September 27 2007, 05:17:16 UTC
awwwww that was so... fuzzy :3 the whole metaphor you have of uruha like a duck is very fitting... but however to say that 'hey uruha you're just like a duck!' 'OH YEAH! I AM! ^_^' would be a little funny wouldn't it? but still it reminds me of their possible childish fun when the both of them are together :333333 when they aren't busy trying to be badass and sexy, that is XDDDD i really like reita in here, i lack vocabs but he's so understanding, and um.. insightful? is that the word? he has perspective. gahhh okay nevermind if i don't make sense. i love the fact that reita's all 'i'm here for you so just shoot, anytime you're ready' 8)

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insentient_doll September 28 2007, 02:09:48 UTC
Fuzzy? YAY! And I thought I was just rambling inanely in this one, I'm glad someone thought otherwise XD;

Yes, Reita was insightful in this one ^_^ I like him here, actually, because at least for the first time I haven't victimized him to some extent O.o LOL And I knowww~! I can so imagine them having such a good time as well like that, when they're away from the thousands of eyes watching them and stuff XD

Thank you for reading, hun; it's much appreciated! =3

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love_from_am October 1 2007, 09:01:28 UTC
I wouldn't have thought of the comparison with the duck. You have really good ideas all the time. *Pout* I wish I did. Although humans are dependent creatures, aren't ducks also? I know you meant by ducks floating, specifically, but I had to get my head around it. >_>

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insentient_doll October 2 2007, 14:16:00 UTC
Everyone is capable of coming up with good ideas. I'm sure you'll be able to conjure up some of yours in due time ^_^

Well, yes; ducks are also dependent on each other too, but for this drabble I was specifically aiming at their independence when it comes to floating ^^ If I included other aspects, then the piece won't remain a drabble anymore XD; [And Uruha will be sad if everything about him is compared to a duck ^_^;]

If I get some other ideas then I'll be writing more friendship fics in the future ^_^ And thank you for reading! =D

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love_from_am October 3 2007, 09:43:03 UTC
Uruha would be pissed off, more than anything. XP The fic would turn out to be a table of similarities between Uru and a duck. And maybe we could find a picture of a duck and make a really physical comparison. Then it'd be an illustrated fic. XD I'm going a little crazy with the idea now.

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lapsusxlinguae October 4 2007, 01:51:56 UTC
this is not pointless by any stretch of the imagination.
it was, strangely enough, just what I needed right now.
[feels comforted]

I really like how you write Reita in here.
lovely work, thanks :)

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insentient_doll October 4 2007, 09:33:14 UTC
I'm happy to know that the piece comforted you in some way ^_^ And frankly, I also like how I portrayed Reita here. He really makes a good buddy XD

You're welcome for the sharing ^^ And thank you for reading! =D

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penumbra369 October 14 2007, 05:53:18 UTC
...i can absolutely see this scenario. reita really would think like that about some ducks, and he's got uruha perfectly pegged. i love it. :D

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insentient_doll October 14 2007, 06:17:08 UTC
I can also see this scenario happening in reality =3 I can imagine Reita sitting in the park and observing the ducks =D And Uruha fit the description perfectly so I made him the comparison point of the duck XD

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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mrsleeminwoo December 20 2008, 17:02:32 UTC
HAHAHA this was really cute XD

And I felt that Uruha fitted whatever Reita said perfectly LOL. and Rei-chan was so cute to run away in the end after he made the last comment ahhahaha XD Yay, now I can sleep in happiness ~

Thank you very much ;DD When I come back in another 24 hours time, you can expect more sudden comments because I am going to read every single fic you have XD but you'll probably recognize similiar words because of my horrible vocab and dead brain hahhahaa XD

Thank you so much for not minding outdated comments! Now google is seriously going to be my best friend for helping me find you (& your fics) ;DD <333

Lotsa looove! <3

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insentient_doll December 21 2008, 12:50:04 UTC
I would run away too if I was in Reita's place XD And don't worry so much about repeating the same thing in your comments, it's the thought that counts anyway =D

Thank you for reading! I'm glad to know this made you happy before going to sleep ^_^

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