[Gazette] Ephemeral (1/1)

[insentient_doll]

Title: Ephemeral
Genres: General, Introspection, Romance & Humor [both in light doses]
Rating: G
Warning: Story length.
Characters: Reita & OC
Synopsis: Attraction in an entirely new definition.
Comments: This story rooted from one question alone but took almost three months to complete. Inspirations for finishing this are never-ending rainy days

Comments

[love_from_am]

The reactions or the feelings that weren't explained are impressive. I really like how you described them, yet not explained them. Despite the pairing being het, I quite like the fic. I could see the amount of effort you put in. I'm curious to know what the question the story rooted from was. ^^"

[insentient_doll]

I'm glad you liked it despite the story being het ^-^ And the question the story rooted from was: "Is it possible to have feelings for someone you frequently see, but know nothing about?"

Thank you for reading, it's much appreciated! =D

[love_from_am]

I thought the idea of fate was more prominent than 'having feelings for someone you frequently see, but know nothing about'. I had an idea similar to yours if it was the latter. I don't think 'idea' is the right word to use, but I can't find the one I'm looking for. =/ I forgot to add that your characterisations were perfectly fitting in the fic. I thought Reita was just how he should be. *Glomp*

[eatyou_alive]

sdgdsgdsgsdgd i should be studying now but i fear that if i come back to this later i wont be able to get my thoughts back! *flail*please don't mind how scattered my thoughts can be

[insentient_doll]

O_O OMG LONG COMMENT FROM YOU! *SPAZZFLAIL calms down and squishes you hard* XDDD

I sorta intended for full-blown Romance not to happen in this one because for one thing, I didn't want it to turn into another love story, and another thing is that it comes off as too overdone x-x; But I understand what you're trying to say with the thing regarding time frames; it's how at first nothing was there [emotion, I mean] and the distance between them was so big. Yet with every meeting they seem to be gradually feeling something, and their distance slowly lessens until they finally met in the end 8D

Frankly, when I was first planning out the story, I didn't know if it would have a direction because what can happen with two people who keep on seeing each other? XDD;; They can't go on forever like that of course @_@ But as I wrote out each scene step by step I finally came up with that ending you read XD I didn't like too much dialogue in this one because it didn't seem right, but I love love LOVE the ending because they finally met and I

[roseisrain]

Gazehet! <3 It's so rare, and you did it beautifully! I swear I re-read this the second I was done. XD

And. uhm. Yes. I'm speechless. Will express myself in LJ hearts. ♥ ♥ ♥

[insentient_doll]

Thank you for the praise =3 And yay, hearts! XD

Also, thank you very much for taking the time to read; I appreciate it a lot ^_^

[yoru_kozi]

♥♥♥♥♥

The quote at the end is just perfect.

I loved this story very much! ^-^

[insentient_doll]

The quote is a personal favorite XD And, I'm happy to know that you love this story a lot =3

Thank you for reading and reviewing~! ^_^

[miisha_chan]

this is just like a movie
I might sound cliche but this is so beautiful
and I agree with everyone else, the quote a the the end makes it more lively and poetic ^^

[insentient_doll]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this~! ^_^ The story itself is long yet you managed to finish it and leave a comment as well. It makes me really happy ♥

Once again, thank you =D [And I love your icon, Chi is so cute =3]

[miisha_chan]

Waw, you reply my comment
That just sweet =3
Yes, I feel uncontent 'coz I just found this fic *I've should read it when u posted it*
And yeah, u might heard it over and over
But I just gonna said it again
I like this fic! v(^o^)v

And yes! Chi is very cute
Verrrrryyy x3