[Gazette] Substituting (1/1)

[insentient_doll]

Title: Substituting
Genre: Satire
Rating: G
Characters: Ruki, Kai & Aoi
Synopsis: Having the last laugh [even when you're undeserving].
Comments: Written for un_love_you prompt # 08 [I'm cruel.]. It's amusingly amazing on how I concocted this one in more or less than 20 minutes while I struggle with my other unfinished works for months. The title wasn't meant

Comments

[eatyou_alive]

OUCH ruki, OUCH. well here it sure seems like aoi's the more simple minded one out of the two :\

this reminds me (and i was even thinking about it in the train today) again about how i was someone's potential replacement

(you're listening to poker face! i love that song! !8D)

[insentient_doll]

Ouch, indeed x-x Reita should have been in Aoi's place but I took mercy on him hahaha! XDD;; If Aoi knew the truth I think he'll be... a million times heartbroken @_@

Thank you for reading~! =D

[I like the song, too; just a little scandalized on what the entire song means, though ^^;;]

[alteregosadist]

If only he wasn’t smoking that very moment, Ruki would’ve openly showed his grin.

“Why should I?” Ruki asked, voice reeking of arrogance. “It’s not like what he’s doing now wasn’t done to him before. Only I never told him.”

These lines caught my attention right away. Solid beginning and ending. I really like the way these short pieces convey so much in only a few words. Makes you step back and think for once.

[insentient_doll]

I've come to the conclusion that short works the best for me since it's less time consuming XD But that's not to say I don't like writing long ones, though.

Again, thank you for reading~! ^^