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[insidethiscell]

there's a haze across the city
an orange glow around the edges

its a feeling inside i get
cool nights, on the brink
full to the brim.

i find you fascinating.

time is leaving,
pain is not. its on its way.

again i will leave behind
a person

much more.
much, much more.

on the brink of everything.

Comments

[tadariada]

I"m excited that you're coming home so soon, Kali! I know its sort of crappy to think to leave all your new friends, but aleast you know you wont be too lonely here, right? Also, I liked the poem a lot. It has a good mix of imagery and emotion and I like that you write without a determined form.