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The Girl That Kissed Me
Jan 28, 2005 01:50
This feeling has been long since faded (
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hlbstriker
January 28 2005, 16:16:11 UTC
gosh berto...all i can say is you own at poetry. i love you dude.
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jennerosityls05
January 28 2005, 18:09:48 UTC
hey are you devin virette? (sry if i spelled your name wrong)
anyways alberto that was a great poem my friend. you rock my socks
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yeah
hlbstriker
January 28 2005, 19:41:39 UTC
hey, this is devin! who are you?
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anonymous
February 8 2005, 03:49:23 UTC
Hello, what are you thinking. You spelled "intuition" and "relieved" wrong, and the first line in the third stanza doesn't make sense. Do you call yourself a poet?
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anyways alberto that was a great poem my friend. you rock my socks
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