The Girl That Kissed Me

Jan 28, 2005 01:50

This feeling has been long since faded ( Read more... )

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hlbstriker January 28 2005, 16:16:11 UTC
gosh berto...all i can say is you own at poetry. i love you dude.

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jennerosityls05 January 28 2005, 18:09:48 UTC
hey are you devin virette? (sry if i spelled your name wrong)

anyways alberto that was a great poem my friend. you rock my socks

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yeah hlbstriker January 28 2005, 19:41:39 UTC
hey, this is devin! who are you?

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anonymous February 8 2005, 03:49:23 UTC
Hello, what are you thinking. You spelled "intuition" and "relieved" wrong, and the first line in the third stanza doesn't make sense. Do you call yourself a poet?

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