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CSI Redux

May 11, 2009 17:25

Title: CSI Redux
Chapter: Bodies in Motion
Rating: Teen
Pairing: Grissom/Sara
Spoilers: Episode 601
Summary: AU series. Grissom and Sara have a past that is more than most realize.
Author’s Notes: I have neglected this series for awhile and I deserve a spanking!

( “Redux” )

*teen, insomnfreak, -grissom/sara

Comments 23

elfling65 May 11 2009, 23:52:10 UTC

EEEEEEE!! So happy to see this! Sara, Sara, Sara! Sofia's just angst fodder, I suppose I shouldn't be surprised she's still uncertain. Grissom just needs to make her see, right? He needs to get his subconscious out of the game and be more forth coming! You made my day San, thank you.

insomnfreak May 13 2009, 13:57:27 UTC

Yeah, I needed to cause a little angst here but not too much, to lead the story into the next chapter.
I'm glad you liked it and hope to have the next chapter out a little sooner.

San

caro_gsr May 12 2009, 00:32:34 UTC

yey!!! Finally a new chapter, kind of short but I liked it all the same. I can't believe Grissom made that comment about Sofia, he should've known Sara would get like that. I think any woman would get jelouse if her speacial someone said anything like that regarding another woman!
Anyway, I can't wait to see how all this develops!!!! =)

insomnfreak May 13 2009, 14:00:49 UTC

Not my usual length but this chapter is closely connected to the next and originally I was going to write one big chater. But, I thought that might take me longer and I had already made you guys wait long enough so...
Glad you liked it and I appreciate you sticking around to read and comment. Thanks!

San

csikathy May 12 2009, 02:13:00 UTC

It's really nice to see a new chapter from you. This is a great series and one that I really want to read from the beginning all over again.

insomnfreak May 13 2009, 14:03:28 UTC

Thank you! I forgot to post the link to the past chapters but if I get around to putting it on GF I will add that it. The series is rather long and I think that does help.

Again, thanks for reading and commenting!

San

citymusings May 12 2009, 03:57:35 UTC

Very nice job.

Last paragraph, however, you might want to note, "even if tshe was the only other person around."

insomnfreak May 13 2009, 14:04:58 UTC

Whoops, good catch. Thanks for letting me know and I will go back in an edit that.

citymusings May 13 2009, 21:59:53 UTC

ssidleismyidol May 12 2009, 05:07:10 UTC

YAYYYYYYYYYY UPDATE!!! *scares the cat while jumping up and down ecstatic*

This is why I love your writing and this series so much. I mean, why? WHY is it that nobody ever mentioned that hideous, uncomfortable, couch in Grissom's townhouse?
There had to be an explanation for that "thing" and BAM! You deliver.
Short but wonderful. I love domestic geeks, Jealous Sara, clueless Grissom and you for writing this!
THANK YOU!

Oh and I'm not too keen on Sofia so...Gooo SARA! Claim the man!

Ok I should shush now.

*goes back to read it again*
squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

insomnfreak May 13 2009, 14:14:48 UTC

You see what your lovely bribe of cookies gets ;)

When they were trying to make Sofia a possible love interest for Grissom, I was like, no way, there's no chemistry, unless you consider WP's natural phermone-hotness chemistry. When it looked like they had given that bad idea up I was like, whatever, I guess I don't hater her.

But, she does make a good adversary for Sara. You know she's never going to win but she makes you root for Sara a little louder.

Thank you, thank you for my lovely comment!

San