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Kiss Me, It'll Heal [but it won't forget] [Tseng/Reno/Rufus] NC-17

Nov 06, 2008 23:18

Title: Kiss Me, It’ll Heal [but it won’t forget ( Read more... )

character: rufus, genre: threesome, genre: slash, rating: nc-17, character: tseng, character: reno, pairing: tseng/reno/rufus, fandom: final fantasy, author: torncorpse

Comments 37

garinarayne November 6 2008, 23:39:48 UTC

Um. HOT. Um.

Brain mush.

Will there be more? OT3 for me here.

insomniacs_home November 7 2008, 00:43:58 UTC

at current i am unsure if there will be more. i do have plans, but it's a case of if i can write them or not.

i'm glad you liked it though. ^^,

lilymoon1 November 6 2008, 23:51:34 UTC

Very nicely done! I'd love to read more if you're thinking of continuing it.

insomniacs_home November 7 2008, 00:44:29 UTC

i am considering, yes. i feel it's open for it, so i may try to do some more over the next few days.

sildil November 6 2008, 23:57:07 UTC

I liked this and I'd love to know if you are planning more :)

insomniacs_home November 7 2008, 00:45:14 UTC

possibly. considering the general response so far, it is a distinct possibility.
thank you so much.

etrix November 7 2008, 01:00:41 UTC

That was a very interesting take on this grouping. I luv the way Reno, so used to obeying both Tseng and Rufus just goes along with it.

And he was a virgin, at least to guy-sex. I don't think anybody was expecting that, not his bosses and not me either.

Nice ending, leaves it open for more *she says with Big Eyes*

insomniacs_home November 8 2008, 12:25:44 UTC

Hahaha. Yes, I am working on a second part. Lol. I didn't think this would be so well recieved, but alas, my brain has started spouting more. ^_^

Thank you muchly.

I did have my reasons for Reno's state - mostly to show just how much he trusts his employers, hopefully I'll draw on that later.
Thanks for reading.

karadin November 7 2008, 01:34:53 UTC

The set up doesn't work for me, and without a plausible scenario, it's difficult to get into the fic.

insomniacs_home November 8 2008, 12:26:25 UTC

Well, I thank you for taking the time to tell me what your hang ups were.

Thanks for that.

karadin November 8 2008, 13:28:44 UTC

Well you did mention in the beginning that Rufus has an army of TURKS at his command, he's a character who blows heads off, and stood up to a WEAPON, so the scenario as you've written it, doesn't work for his character (in canon) it might have worked for another character. We read fanfic for love of the characters, and if they veer off in fundamental ways, well, it's harder to get into the fic.