Story: The Re-Up Clause

[inspectorzutto]

     MJ was about to sign the contract when the lawyer stopped him.
     "You need to go through and initial each section," he said.  "Look for the little boxes on the right side of the pages."
      MJ sneered at the suit; being in rock and roll for 20 years only magnified his resentment for the ordinariness, the formality, the system, and basically

Comments

[aelfscine]

Nice story. :) I think the 'It was blood' line is the strongest, and I almost think you could just end it there. The last couple lines feel a little predictable, whereas ending with the blood would add just a little bit of creepiness at the end. Still, good work, glad you're writing. :)