Breaking Rules (Daphne, Padma, Demelza, Susan, PG-13)

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Title: Breaking Rules
Author/Artist:
Characters: Daphne Greengrass, Padma Patil, Demelza Robins, Susan Bones
Prompt number: 189
Word Count: 3,598
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Summary: An encounter brings about a friendship between four girls that crosses House boundaries.
Disclaimer: As much as I would love to own JK Rowling's world, I most

Comments

[mollywheezy]

I absolutely loved this! Excellent job with the start and slow build of the friendship! I loved that they bonded over and got to bring down Umbridge. Thank you for such an excellent story, Mystery Author. :)

[author_by_night]

I guess I can thank people now that reveals are up! (...and have been for a while. Sorry.)

At any rate, thank you so much! I enjoyed writing it.

[violetbehaviour]

This was super lovely! Unlikely friendships are the best friendships. Great job with this!

[author_by_night]

Thank you!

And yes, I quite agree. :)

[silverlioness80]

Sisters are doing for themselves....

Brilliant story!

[delayed_poet]

What a lovely glimpse into how four very different girls can overcome circumstances to become friends and help one another through the toughest of times. Beautifully done!

[author_by_night]

Thank you!

[germankitty]

Oh, wonderful! Just a couple of days ago, I thought it'd be a great idea ifs someone wrote a HP story featuring some of the "lesser" characters during book canon, à la the ST:TNG episode "Lower Decks" -- and here you are, doing just that! How'd you know? ;-)

Seriously, though, great job. Plausible set-up, good characterization (seems Ron took the wrong Patil twin to the Yule Ball, no?) and a delight to read, making me want more. Well done, MA!

[author_by_night]

Hi! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. (Also, for reminding me - inadvertently - that I hadn't thanked people for reviewing. I definitely saw this and appreciated it at the time, too.)

Glad the characterization was good - that was one of my concerns.

[germankitty]

You're very welcome. :-)