Dinner-Date To Breakfast (Harry/Astoria, M)

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Title: Dinner-Date To Breakfast
Author/Artist:
Characters: Harry Potter, Astoria Greengrass
Prompt number: 205
Word Count: 5,780
Rating: M
Warnings: None.
Summary: When Harry is set up on a blind date he doesn’t expect the location never mind the girl with a taste for Vodka.
Disclaimer: All character, spells, magical equipment and locations from

Comments

[delayed_poet]

I have a huge soft spot for Astoria anyway, and I loved your interpretation of her! This was fun, a bit silly in parts, and so very raw in others. The lightness and depth played off each other so well, and it was a delight to see them both realize the possibilities in being with the other. And her final line totally stole the show! Lovely!

[violetbehaviour]

Oh. My. Gahhhhhh! I love this oh so very much! You have so many gorgeous lines throughout that truly set this story apart and makes it beautiful poetry.

You managed to make me feel what thry both were feeling. It felt like it came so easily in your words. Love love love.

The dynamics between Astoria and Daphne were spot on, the Ron love is always appreciative, the Ginny positives and Draco too. You made their past relationships more real and not just "a bad breakup" I adore that!

Already said there were many beautiful lines but this was my fav:
Her eyes connected with him, surging energy into his dull spirit and lit him like a firework in Autumn

Thank you for this!

[mollywheezy]

I really enjoyed your characterization of Astoria, and loved how nervous she and Harry both were. You showed their feelings well. :)

[kiertorata]

Yay, first date stories are always nice! i really liked how Astoria was pretty assertive despite being nervous. I think Harry needs someone like that.

[greyeyesbluetoo]

I LOVED this! This is another ship I've never given a second thought to, but now I will. This was really great. Tots romantic to the 10!