For You Only (Marcus/Katie, M)

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Title: For You Only
Author:
Characters: Marcus Flint/Katie Bell
Prompt number: 153 - “He told her he loved her, she thought it was a joke. It had to be. Right?”
Word Count: ~9.7K
Rating: R (M)
Warnings: Het sex (not explicit, but on-screen), Profanity (explicit), Reference to rape (not on screen), Capture and enslavement (not at all graphic)

Comments

[katmarajade]

Ah, star-crossed lovers in wartime! I really enjoyed your take on both Katie and Marcus in this story, and I liked Snape's role and the twist with her cousin and Oliver and how it all connected. The backstory with her father was particularly compelling, and I really liked how you connected everything and brought it all together so neatly.

“On my soul, Katie, all I do is for you. For you only.” Oh my! Hearts in eyes swooning here ...

“Jesus, fuck! What have you been doing over the years, Flint-weightlifting Erumpents?” I legit snort-laughed out loud at this!

And what a beautiful last line-- great note to end on. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

[violetbehaviour]

I really enjoyed this! It had just the perfect balancing amounts or fluff and angst! I really enjoyed your descriptions of Marcus and Katie!

Totally going on a whim here but I'm really hoping the "Kirkwall" mention was a dragon age reference. If not, I'm totally lying to myself anyway and insisting it is! Haha

Wonderful job, love! Truly.

[kiertorata]

Wow, you really took us on a journey with this fic! So many intense emotions and interesting bits of plot. Katie and Marcus aren't characters that I generally read or even think about, but you definitely got me interested in them. Great job!

[greyeyesbluetoo]

He slid a few feet over towards her. “You still like me. You definitely want me. I can tell.”
“Someone’s overdosed on the Patented Daydream Charms again, I can see.”
“I still want and like you,” he admitted, moving over some more. “More than like.”

That was both sexy and made me laugh out loud.

Your Katie is very feisty, just as a Gryffindor should be, and I love that you made her a person of color. So original! Your Marcus makes me drool. I want one.

Great story!

[articcat621]

Oh my goodness, this gave me so many feels. I adored this, and I love this pairing, and you breathed so much life into them. Well done <3