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FIC: Calm is the Morn (Barefoot Boys Day 11)

Oct 21, 2007 15:14

Title: Calm is the Morn
Rating: PG-13
Words: ~2200
Disclaimer: All your characters are belong to Jo.
Prompt: 11 (In Memoriam A.H.H. - XI - Tennyson - “Calm is the morn without a sound.”)
Previous Days: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10
Summary: Sirius wants to make things right with Remus. Set the morning after the full moon, just a few days ( Read more... )

barefoot boys, hp fics, remus/sirius

Comments 37

a_shadow_there October 21 2007, 20:08:08 UTC

Absolutely beautiful. Tears and everything! You are such a beautiful writer.

And this:
"“Remus,” Sirius breathes, and at the sound Remus’ eyes flutter closed and he pushes his cheek against Sirius’ hand, and there’s nothing left for Sirius to do but this, to close the space between them, finally, finally pressing his lips against Remus’. Gentle, almost chaste. "

Just...wow.

interrobanging October 22 2007, 01:09:41 UTC

Tears, wow, I'm so glad you liked it!! Thank you for saying such nice things, too. =)

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interrobanging October 22 2007, 01:12:44 UTC

First, I hope the paramedics have revived you!!

Second, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! It was just the most fun I've ever had writing anything, actually, so it makes me ridiculously happy to know that others are enjoying it too. =)

Will write more soon!! An angsty plot bunny is devouring my brain right now, but I'm going to draft that and set it aside till I tie up some of my current projects. At least, that's the plan.

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interrobanging October 22 2007, 12:32:29 UTC

Oh, the angst is a totally different piece, an OotP-era self-destructive!Sirius idea that ate my brain last night. Already partly drafted, and very, very sad, but then that time period is pretty much all about the sad. =(

perhaps some, dare I say it, boyfondling...

Muahaha. Dare you say it? I think you dare. This may be totally cliche by now, but I'm thinking there may need to be some Room of Requirement action in this series. What say you?

starla_kid October 21 2007, 21:25:09 UTC

you'd better ressurect paddynmoon. She's died.

i'm nearly dead. That was PERFECT. thankyou thankyou thankyouuuuuuuuu

this was my fave

Sirius strokes the side of Remus’ face, fingers moving of their own accord as the kiss deepens, and he thinks he could do this forever, kiss Moony until they’re both a hundred and eighty years old, because it’s the best thing he’s ever felt, the best thing he’s ever done.

interrobanging October 22 2007, 01:16:36 UTC

No, thank you, a lot, seriously!! It makes me so happy to know that people enjoyed reading this even half as much as I enjoyed writing it!!

P.S. I hope you did not actually die after posting this comment, but have lived on to write another day. =)

liveonthesun October 21 2007, 22:57:24 UTC

YES SOMEBODY DID SAY BOYKISSING!!

Woah. That was brilliant. Really.

“’s all right, Moony. It’ll have to be,” he says, running his thumbs over Remus’ cheekbones. “Because I’m going to kiss you again.”

Remus nods and licks his lips.

That killed me. OMG, it so perfect!!

interrobanging October 22 2007, 01:18:21 UTC

It was high time for some boykissing, right?! :D

YAY, I'm glad you liked it!! And I'm glad you liked the end because I debated whether to end it like that and decided to go with it. Thank you for reading and for such kind comments!!

liveonthesun October 22 2007, 21:23:11 UTC

The ending was the my favorite part!

And I added you to my flist, btw. :D

colourlesshade October 22 2007, 01:17:05 UTC

They're so beautiful and nervous and awkward. Yay! I love it!

interrobanging October 22 2007, 02:21:49 UTC

Yay, thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D They were definitely so nervous but I think things worked out all right for them. Heehee. =)