Oh, this is beautiful. To me, it almost sounds like a monologue, or like a prologue to an orginal piece of fiction... so I suppose that would be my suggestion. :) Besides, turning it into original fic might be therapeutic without getting personal, which sounds like a pretty decent option to me.
It's good to see you still hanging in there. *hugs*
Oh, this is wonderful. So beautiful, and yet so real. I love that it isn't a sugar-coated version of what love can be. This was particularly lovely:
"It doesn’t come embroidered on white ribbons carried in the beaks of bluebirds in an animated movie - it is written in the daily camaraderie of friendship, etched in the patterns of trust and understanding. It doesn’t gallop in on horseback at the last moment, as the music swells and the final credits roll - it comes quietly when it is least expected, when it is least sought."
Just really lovely. No matter where you go with this, I'm totally on board :)
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I still think that this would be a marvelous part of original work or fiction!!
Cute icon, too!
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It's good to see you still hanging in there. *hugs*
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"It doesn’t come embroidered on white ribbons carried in the beaks of bluebirds in an animated movie - it is written in the daily camaraderie of friendship, etched in the patterns of trust and understanding. It doesn’t gallop in on horseback at the last moment, as the music swells and the final credits roll - it comes quietly when it is least expected, when it is least sought."
Just really lovely. No matter where you go with this, I'm totally on board :)
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