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Mar 27, 2005 23:49

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playdohheart March 28 2005, 04:57:05 UTC
did you write that??? its so good.

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inthebed_disco March 28 2005, 05:03:56 UTC
yeah haha my creative writing teacher raved.
thanks devy

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playdohheart March 28 2005, 05:07:20 UTC
yeah, i never knew you were such a great poet. keep 'em coming!

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the___heartfall March 28 2005, 05:10:57 UTC
i really liked the ending.

or the whole thing, really.

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swegian March 28 2005, 08:21:18 UTC
i love it.
the first verse gets me.

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svojosoba March 28 2005, 08:57:18 UTC
i didn't realize that this and the other poem you posted was your own creation. i love your writing so much. this one is really amazing, i want to hug it. ting's a (reallyreallygood) writer!

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inthebed_disco March 28 2005, 16:21:56 UTC
awww thanks baybee!! <3

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sassy_robots March 29 2005, 06:23:56 UTC
Ting, you picked the artwork from the worst Ryan Adams record haha. :-P

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inthebed_disco March 29 2005, 06:39:21 UTC
i know, but it's a cool picture!!!!

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