am i lucky that you're not psychic?

[inthekeyofpike]

i am circling around your name like a hawk

Comments

[lover_youshould]

♥

I love the repetition of "your name" and I love all the imagery but esp. of the speaker being cooked in a pot (which just screams "elfie!") and all the little details, how it's being stirred, what's being added.

I also love this line hardcore:

circumnavigating your name like magellan

♥!!

[inthekeyofpike]

man, kino, i ♥ poetry, and writing it. i'm sloooowly getting back in the groove. thank you for the comment~~~~