Prose : Do you feel lucky?

[theharkness]

Comments

[exsequar]

Oh sweetie, this is lovely! I adore Ianto's narration of their lives as a Dick Tracy comic... oh, I'm sorry, graphic novel ;) Really cute and sweet and also quite touching. Great job! ♥

[eiranea]

~g~ Freaking awesome, that's what this is.

You've Ianto's inner musings down perfectly, they are so *50's era dime-store detective novel* it's almost scary. Reminds me of a less insane Sin City actually.

Y'know, you're almost starting to turn me to Jack/Ianto, although I'm still gonna ship either Jack/Tosh or Jack/Owen myself :P

[burntcopper]

:snicker: Oh, Ianto. Everything is made better by hard-boiled film noir detective narration.

[halfspokenwords]

This is wonderful! I love love love Ianto's film noir narration, and I love that Jack has him all figured out in that respect.

And of course the beginnings of Jack/Ianto there-- with ice cream, no less! :)

[chughes1147]

Catching up with all of these has been brilliant!

This one is possibly my favourite, with the film-noir-Dick-Tracy style and the gorgeous little ending. So good!!