I absolutely adore your style of writing ♥. From the descriptions of the places, the plots, the emails, tim's and prose, and the way you write Jack and Ianto especially...it really is fabulous!
It's always nice when someone who's actually familiar with Cardiff writes about the missions around Cardiff, instead of making up random places, and hopes that no-one can tell the difference :o) That really takes me out of the story usually, and i love that with this i can actually visualise where the characters are...makes it all the more believable! (Although i think the day i read a fic where they include that man singing in his magic-mike on Queen Street i will possible explode with happiness.)
Plus, i think i love you for including Barry and Barry Island in the last couple of entries. Being a Barry girl myself, it put a huge smile on my face!
I adore Cardiff. Having been born and bred here I'm so fond of it, it's ridiculous! When I actually found Torchwood I couldn't have felt more proud that it was in Wales. And I love Barry :D I've family who work there and I used to spend a lot of time on the beach and in the arcade when I was a kid.
Oo, the magic mike man has to appear in here one day. He has to. It wouldn't be Cardiff without him :D
Aw, I love caring!Jack. He and Ianto are so adorable, and as always, your fic is great. :) I'm a little confused though. I though Harriet and Gerald were the 1918 team, not the 1940s team. Am I totally off base?
Thank you so much for pointing that out! :D I try to stay faithful to nearly all historical facts and it ends up I confuse the main one! Altered a bit, although Harriet and Gerald have to come back at some point. They're too fabulous not to!
I've had this series on my desktop for a while now and am slowly getting round to reading it. My next job is to start from the beginning! So far, everything I've read is superb and so in character - not a 14-year-old emo girl in sight, LOL.
It is so wonderful to have real Cardiff in a fic - with real history - thank you! It's a privilege to be Kaardiff born and Kaardiff bred and a pleasure to share that privilege (now I sound like Paul Jones).
Love these lines:
I'm alright.
Got any morphine by chance?
though shouldn't that be by "any" chance? Also, I'm, a bit confused by this: I've never heard of an Enrico (and he's Italian by the way.) You two should meet, actually. should that "never" be there? (and, here, in probably my other favourite Iantoisms, cos I love snarky Ian,:I wouldn't let you near my car if you paid me. I've seen the way you drive, Jack Harkness. Even curbs cringe when they see you drive around a corner.
Unless we're talking bondage (or unmentionable American spelling), "curb" should be spelt "kerb".
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Thanks, sweets <3
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It's always nice when someone who's actually familiar with Cardiff writes about the missions around Cardiff, instead of making up random places, and hopes that no-one can tell the difference :o) That really takes me out of the story usually, and i love that with this i can actually visualise where the characters are...makes it all the more believable! (Although i think the day i read a fic where they include that man singing in his magic-mike on Queen Street i will possible explode with happiness.)
Plus, i think i love you for including Barry and Barry Island in the last couple of entries. Being a Barry girl myself, it put a huge smile on my face!
Looking forward to reading more!
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I adore Cardiff. Having been born and bred here I'm so fond of it, it's ridiculous! When I actually found Torchwood I couldn't have felt more proud that it was in Wales. And I love Barry :D I've family who work there and I used to spend a lot of time on the beach and in the arcade when I was a kid.
Oo, the magic mike man has to appear in here one day. He has to. It wouldn't be Cardiff without him :D
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Thanks again for the comment, sweets.
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It is so wonderful to have real Cardiff in a fic - with real history - thank you! It's a privilege to be Kaardiff born and Kaardiff bred and a pleasure to share that privilege (now I sound like Paul Jones).
Love these lines:
I'm alright.
Got any morphine by chance?
though shouldn't that be by "any" chance? Also, I'm, a bit confused by this: I've never heard of an Enrico (and he's Italian by the way.) You two should meet, actually. should that "never" be there? (and, here, in probably my other favourite Iantoisms, cos I love snarky Ian,:I wouldn't let you near my car if you paid me. I've seen the way you drive, Jack Harkness. Even curbs cringe when they see you drive around a corner.
Unless we're talking bondage (or unmentionable American spelling), "curb" should be spelt "kerb".
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