new fanfic, omg!

[inthevast]

Title: Retina

Comments

a word that is being drug out of him, over and over

[ziebra]

Wow... it certainly is a bit like Oedipus, metaphorically.
That was haunting...Very good!

[slowbeats]

okay that was scary, but still greatly written ^_^

[love_is_epic]

Is it wrong that I love a crazy Duncan?

This is a really great look into what might have/could have happened in that hospital. They always hinted to the fact that Duncan was a little more mentally unstable than they showed and this fits perfectly with that.

All he wants now is to go blind. He wants to stab his own eyes out like king Oedipus. He wants to laugh out his insides, till all the blood comes out of him.

I love the analogy.

Little fic... big punch! Thanks for letting me read : )