jumping over time for you

Aug 14, 2010 22:17


jumping over time for you
sungjong/myungsoo
660 words
Sungjong likes to pretend that he's secure about this entire thing - this relationship, this mess of blurred lines and too-fast heartbeats.
so this fandom is quicksand, i swear :( so nervous about the characterization omg ;_;
And Sungjong doesn't know what else to do or say except tilt his head upwards and close the distance. )

writings, pairing: sungjong/myungsoo, genre: fluff, length: oneshot, fandom: infinite

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mei_zi August 14 2010, 14:37:58 UTC
You wrote such a fluffy, pretty fanfic out of my Infinite OTP. ;_; ♥ /happy

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redcottonstar August 18 2010, 04:36:28 UTC
someone else with this otp? ;___; /clings

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onew August 14 2010, 14:39:02 UTC

YOU. YOOOOOOOOU. OMG. /flails

i really, really like how you portrayed sungjong here. he's not too girly, not too flamboyant or what. he's just an average troubled kid going through an awkward phase. and myungsoo. MYUNGSOO. I JUST. AJDKFSDG.

this left me hanging. you are therefore compelled to write a sequel! /nods thoughtfully

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redcottonstar August 18 2010, 04:37:49 UTC
HIIIIIII /flails back

i didn't want to write sungjong like how a lot of people characterize key, so ;____; so glad you liked it!

b-but what would happen in the sequel :(

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mifhe August 14 2010, 16:36:37 UTC
oh crying this was so nicely done. great to finally read something that isn't sad, but not too fluffy that it comes off forced. i especially enjoyed the way you described sungjong's faint insecurities. really nice work on this!

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redcottonstar August 18 2010, 04:38:32 UTC
thank you so much! ;___;

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candiiez August 14 2010, 18:29:59 UTC
It was wonderful. So fluffy, cute and sweet to read =3

Sungjong is so cue. How can Myungsoo loved another person than u ?^_^
Silly ~

L-Sung hwaiiting <3

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redcottonstar August 18 2010, 04:39:14 UTC
thank you! L-sung is adorable ♥~

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blindteddy August 14 2010, 21:12:42 UTC
this was short but so wonderfully short. it was perfect.
just the perfect amount of words for them. ♥
i like how sungjong is not so full of himself and how myungsoo is nervous about sungjong getting the wrong idea.
i like how sungjong tries to hide his worries. it's perfect!
and the kiss at the end was so sweet. just how i see them. shy and lovely.

thanks for writing and sharing! :D

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redcottonstar August 18 2010, 04:39:48 UTC
shy and lovely ♥♥♥♥

thank you for reading and commenting! :3

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