Habits

Dec 27, 2009 20:17

Title: Habits
Length: Oneshot
Author: intricateorchid 
Rating: Rated R for sexual situations.
Pairing: Jonghyun/Kibum
Genre: Not really angst, not really fluff, not really smut... But something in between. With a dash of humor.
Disclaimer: At most, I would only own Voodoo dolls of SHINee. And even then, they are not within my possession.
Summary: Kibum has been building ( Read more... )

megafail, fanfic, fail, habits, shinee, jongkey, oneshot

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kiri125 December 28 2009, 22:36:31 UTC
I can't believe it's your first SHINee fic! This was just really amazing! You pictured Key and Jjong perfectly ;D And the unspoken things between them ;)

You totally need to write more JongKey stories! I'll sit here and wait ;>

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intricateorchid December 29 2009, 02:23:03 UTC
Well believe it or not, it is! xD
But thank you so much! I'm really flattered that my characterization of them was right, because that's what I'm usually the most picky about. ^^;

I'll do so when I can. ;D

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, my dear!

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agapic December 28 2009, 23:33:32 UTC
OMG. THIS. WAS SO CUTE.

I loved it. The Jongkey interactions were such love! You really got their personalities down really well. It was an interesting idea and interesting take on their relationship too; it's not something I've read before, which is saying a lot because I have read what seems like a shit ton of SHINee fanfic.

Anyway. What I am trying to say is PLEASE WRITE MORE. I LOVE IT. ♥

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intricateorchid December 29 2009, 02:30:11 UTC
Thank you so much! It makes me really happy to hear that! And I'm really really flattered that it's new. ^^

Buahaha. Yes. I'll write more when I have the chance. ;)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

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hyukhae_4eva December 29 2009, 00:20:45 UTC
O MAI!O MAI!!!!This is hawt as hell,I'm actually feeling the little frustration Key experienced and I rarely feel anything from a writing,this shows you truly convey the FEELING lol!♥ Keep up the great writing,bb!

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intricateorchid December 29 2009, 02:31:24 UTC
I'm glad for making you feel frustrated then! :P
I'm just kidding. But I'm happy that I managed to make you feel something, haha. Thank you so much for your sweet comment. ;)
Thanks for reading too!
I'll keep on writing! ♥

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hyukhae_4eva December 29 2009, 11:17:28 UTC
Thank you for replying,just replying back here lmao xD Correction,not just keep on writing but keep on writing JongKey SHINee fics,btw,welcome to this SHINee world xD Cliche I must say!

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intricateorchid December 29 2009, 17:44:45 UTC
No problem!
LOL. OK. I'll keep writing Jongkey SHINee fics. ;D
I'll keep my word! Don't worry!
And thank you! I'll enjoy my stay here, hahaha. Pfft, nothing wrong with cliches. Especially when it has to do with SHINee. :P
Thanks for replying to my reply. 8D

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kaiahh December 29 2009, 03:39:54 UTC
So good O.O
Omg.
I... really really liked it ;D

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intricateorchid December 29 2009, 05:04:02 UTC
Short and sweet. xD
Thank you so much! Your comment makes me really happy. :)

Thanks for reading too!

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ontokki December 29 2009, 08:44:35 UTC
forgive me, I'm terribly late to comment but I just love this so much. The reference to Jjong stare is A++++! I love how Jonghyun started to notice that Key watches him at night. And They were friends by day, lovers by night., this line is so ♥

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intricateorchid December 29 2009, 17:42:07 UTC
No worries! A comment is a comment! ;)
Thank you so very much! That was actually one of my favorite lines too, haha. And hearing this come from you is really flattering because I've always been a... silent lurker... to your fanfics... but yeah. :D
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! ♥

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