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Prompt 48 / AU

May 21, 2010 11:39

Title: Lady Poison
Author: Sensei
Prompt: AU
Words: 737
Characters: Naraku/SessMama
Rating: T
Summary: In 2011, a reincarnated Naraku sees a familiar face on television.
Author's Note: This is an entry in my Naraku in Modern Times collection, but it is written to stand alone. But I'm wondering if it needs to continue into a second chapter of its ( Read more... )

salomesensei, prov 48

Comments 17

knittingknots May 21 2010, 16:47:13 UTC

Oh what absolutely delicious ironies you ironed this piece with....

salomesensei May 21 2010, 17:14:02 UTC

Ironed ironies...I love that.

perphila May 21 2010, 17:05:36 UTC

Oh. Oh my goodness. He is going to be in for a shock......lol!

salomesensei May 21 2010, 17:12:27 UTC

Heh, he can still suck toes. But Lady Poison has her own...tentacle, shall we say...that may be quite the shocker. I have no idea how these two came to be my newest OTP. XD Thanks for reading!

rebukes May 21 2010, 17:19:57 UTC

luls.

I love Naraku's fail!carnations. It's like the best thing ever.

Also, this made me lol: Well, he was the original "biodegradable," wasn't he?

salomesensei May 21 2010, 18:57:23 UTC

I loved writing the biodegradable line a lot. Perhaps too much.

And "fail!carnation" is definitely the new genre for these.

<3 for reading

kiramaru7 May 21 2010, 18:47:17 UTC

YES!! More Naraku in modern times!! *loves it* And I think you shoudl do another chappie or two for this!!

salomesensei May 21 2010, 18:58:22 UTC

I'm contemplating whether he could actually meet her at all... Go see her drag show when he realizes this is a taped recording from 6 months earlier, then find out she's a guy in drag. Talon says it's not SessMama reincarnated, it's Sess! LOLOL

kiramaru7 May 21 2010, 19:26:37 UTC

Yes!! At first I also thought it might have been Sessh! So I think you should definitely do something with that! Maybe for the willful prompt over at Bake-off! :D

I really hope you'll consider adding to this!! You've got a great set-up here! :D

salomesensei May 22 2010, 04:47:35 UTC

Thanks so much for your encouragement. I didn't think of it as being Sesshoumaru, since I had made Naraku female in a recent story for his incarnation. But there's so many places to go... I will definitely consider where it might go next!

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kingbaka22 May 22 2010, 02:31:14 UTC

I love your subtle torture of Naraku. The foot fetish, the nice little surprise he's going to get when he meets the "lady" of the west. And being the janitor at some church in the middle of Tennessee. That would be torture for him, anyway.

salomesensei May 22 2010, 03:34:44 UTC

Thank you for the praise. I enjoy these stories faaaaar too much. This one is a follow-up to what I wrote for Inuromp, where I did my first Nar/SessMama fic and created the foot fetish. I can so see her enjoying having pretty boys suck her toes.