[FIC] Insomnia - Ruki-centric (Hinted RukixReita) - Oneshot

[inudela]

Title: Insomnia
Prompt:#11 at tragic_ennui : Nothing better to do
Author: ice_breath_117
Chapter: One-shot
Pairing: Ruki-centric, hinted RukixReita
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Angst.
Warning: Reference to death. Character death. Self-harm, kind of.
Disclaimer: They own me. Not the other way round.

Summary: With the night fully settled and the moon unseen behind

Comments

[inudela]

Yeah..I felt bad about that. Since I do love him to pieces haha.

I'm glad you thought so. Thanks for reading.

[surikesu]

*starts throwing carrots at you for killing Reita*

Sweet baby J (E? hehe), once I clicked onto the link I knew I'd find myself gawking XDD
I loved how you repeated "The dark hues of unfading bruises clear against the chalky pallor" to emphasise and the flow was just right considering the length of it ♥xbajillion

[inudela]

*knew this was coming*

Repetition was the recurring theme i was going for, so i'm glad you noticed =)

Thanks for reading ♥

[x_chrizzl3_x]

This had wonderful imagery, and was beautifully descriptive and tragic. I laughed reading the author's note when you were randomly like, "Oh, and, uhm, sorry for killing Reita." Just the way you put it made me go "pfft".

Anyway, I loved the feeling of repetition that seemed to be tied into the story. It was morbid, but perfect in all the right ways. C: I can't wait to see what you come up with next~

[inudela]

Thank you.

Heh ^^;; I am sorry though. I love him to a bajillion pieces, but adding a stranger to the story didn't seem right. hm. maybe i should've left him nameless XD

Ah, I'm glad you noticed that. Thank you for reading.

[x_chrizzl3_x]

You're very welcome~

Yeah, I don't think it would've seemed as personal, since Ruki and Reita just seem to go together naturally. But hey, if you really love a character, you should be able to kill them off. C: You're going to have to do that at one point, and you managed to do it.

I love noticing the little details like that. Cx You're oh so welcome~<33

[inudela]

Ruki and Reita just seem to go together naturally.

Oh, I couldn't agree more XDD

[wiolet_delusion]

Uh, after a basically sleepless night this had a rather big impact on me. To be exact it made me all teary-eyed. But that's a good thing. It was really well written <3 And "Oh, and, uhm, sorry for killing Reita. *hides*" deserved a little chuckle.

Thank you!

[inudela]

I'm really flattered this managed to touch you =) And I appreciate your compliment <3

I felt so bad. I love that man to pieces XDD

No, thank you for reading.

[verensyll]

I know Rei isn't my favourite...but for him to have died...*sniffles* poor Ruki. Morbid oneshot indeed. 8O I congratulae you on a job (superbly) well done!

[inudela]

I know right D8 I feel terrible. But that's what my muses wanted, apparently.. >__>
Nyaw. Thank you =D