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All the Right Moves

May 17, 2010 16:16

Title: All the Right Moves
Author: inugrlrayn
Word Count:249
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Roy/Ed
Summary: One of the advantages of a steady relationship. Written for fma_fic_contest prompt 62 "Quiver"
Warnings: none

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Roy had to admit, there was an unexpected sort of satisfaction that came with settling down. )

Comments 3

too_beauty May 17 2010, 21:18:12 UTC

ummm nice images and so very true! (I still discover new things after 12 years .....)

vvingseternal May 18 2010, 14:49:48 UTC

Lol! So true!
Wow....This was beautiful. : )

Cheers,
-H

straightcogar November 28 2011, 23:49:10 UTC

I've read this before, and can't believe I didn;t leave a comment! You canovey so much emotion in passion in so few words, it's wonderful! and you enver cease to amaze me with your descriptions of Ed's eyes. "apple juice eyes" has to be one of my favorates!