Faulty Memory

May 17, 2010 16:23

Title: Faulty Memory
Author: inugrlrayn
Series: manga
Word Count:187
Rating: PG
Characters: Ed, Roy
Summary: Mustang was different and it just wasn't fair. Written for fma_fic_contest prompt 54 "anger"
Warnings: spoilers for chapter 102

He had earned his automail, with hopeless dreams and foolish pride )

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too_beauty May 17 2010, 21:11:23 UTC
ummmm angsty but so well written .....

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vvingseternal May 18 2010, 16:15:45 UTC
My, my, my, we are on a heartbreak train today. Very well written as always.... I could just feel the heavy, suffocating weight of Ed's fury.

Cheers,
-H

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claytonsgrrl May 25 2010, 20:56:10 UTC
Mustang was different, though. To do this to him of all people, it was cruel. It wasn’t fair.

Oh how I agree with this statement and Ed's anger as well. Nicely done.

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water_soter May 30 2010, 01:17:04 UTC
This just left me breathless. Wonderful story and with so few words.

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