Winning

[inugrlrayn]

Title: Winning
Author: inugrlrayn
Pairing: Ed/Roy
Word Count: 5,545
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Light bondage and... Ed being a spazz about topping?
Summary: Ed realizes that he's usually so distracted by what's being done to him, he has no idea what Roy likes and decides to take matters into his own hands. It's in answer to a prompt greedy_lover gave me for the icon meme.

Comments

[lazylamia]

Ed was so wonderfully shocked that Roy let him to be the dominant one, giving him time and opportunity to explore this experience.
And he has learned that the act of lovemaking is a veeery hard work.

[eonblue_inmay]

Oh, that was great! What a fantastic start to the long weekend. Keep it up, luv!

[dragonimp]

Ed is such a cute spaz! I loved all the little unsure thoughts mixed in with the hawtness.

[greedy_lover]

I love you more then humanly possible. This was epic and sexy ans just perfect and I love you loads.

[ginnyvos]

Ooooh fuck this is so hot I can't even begin to tell you. I mean... I mean... GAAH! The whole thing, it's just so... so... so... Yeah.

I love how unsure Ed is, how he doesn't really seem to know what he's doing or what to do with it and how he's just the tiniest bit harsh just because he's unsure. Roy's indulgence that slowly turns into genuine want was very well portrayed. It was perfectly clear without being laid on too thick.

Still... If you could read Roy's POV? Damn you have idea how happy that'd make me...

This goes into my memories for sure.