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FIC: Irrational Expressions

Feb 25, 2010 07:59

Title: Irrational Expressions
Author: espial
Recipient: manderskoinu
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3214
Warnings: Sex, blow job
Summary: Inui figures out that the ratio between Kaidoh's hip and waist measurements has nothing to do with how he feels.

Author's Notes: Please enjoy. :)

( Irrational Expressions )

fic, author: espial

Comments 10

glowstarducky February 25 2010, 16:37:25 UTC

cats always know how to ruin the moment -_-

and Fuji always makes things more confusing.

very enjoyable fic

espial March 2 2010, 15:59:11 UTC

Thank you, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

lauradbz February 26 2010, 05:41:10 UTC

I loved it! I've never been able to find many good Inui x Kaidou fanfics from Inui's POV on them having sex and everything. I loved all the details and how Kaidou actually wasn't "attacked" by Inui and actively participated!
とてもすごいです！

espial March 2 2010, 15:55:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :) I tried to make it as detailed as possible. Thank you for a lovely comment. :)

kestrelsan February 26 2010, 18:03:12 UTC

Inui hadn't realized the widening gap between them, but as he reviewed the worn notebooks, he could see it clearly.

I love that Inui can see in his past data what he wasn't aware of while it was happening, and then the kind of reversal later on when his data is inadequate to explain his feelings of the moment :).

I also really enjoyed how sensory this was, how I could feel the quiet of the library and the stale, heavy air of Inui's apartment, and how well the pacing fit the mood. Thanks for a really lovely story.

espial March 2 2010, 15:52:25 UTC

Isn't that how it always is? You can see what happened then, but when it's happening present day, you can't see it? Or maybe that's just me. >.>

Thank you for a lovely comment. I'm glad you liked it!

prillalar February 27 2010, 15:45:08 UTC

Inui's always fun when he's confused like this. :) I really liked the sweet domesticity of it all and the way Kaidoh handled things. And the cat, of course!

(Also, I kept expecting Momoshiro to show up at the door, demanding his albums back... *g*)

espial March 2 2010, 15:47:44 UTC

I love confused!Inui, he's always the most fun to deal with. Cats are evil, I've never met one who didn't have it out for me. :) Thank you, I'm glad you like it.

(not going to lie, I was going to put Momoshiro in there at some point, but the chance went away.)

leviosa8 March 5 2010, 20:54:41 UTC

I loved the apartment-sharing days and the way they naturally resume their friendship and make progress in their relationship, thanks to Kaidoh's advances and in spite of Inui's confusion. It seems Kaidoh had already reached all the necessary conclusions on his own. It's just a pity he didn't top Inui in bed too! :D