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Fanfic: Searching for Completion (Green/Red) part 2

Sep 27, 2011 19:18

Title: Searching for Completion
Pairing: Green/Red
Series: Game-verse
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Life isn't fullfilling until you find the one that makes you complete. Green and Red had both been searching for something, btu neither knew what it was for many years. Green-centric; slight character study on his part.
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pokemon, green/red, fanfic

Comments 4

raichu100 September 28 2011, 03:24:19 UTC

baaaaaaaaaaah this is so adorable! So cute! I loved it! I loved the way you focused the story on their childhood and rivalry...friendship with Leaf...confusion about the feelings they had for each other...and finally ended it on such a cute and fluffy note~! Thanks for the great read, I really enjoyed it. :D

inulovinkit September 28 2011, 18:40:08 UTC

Thanks!

I really wanted to show how they grew together and how Green changed over the course of the story before I got them together. To me, that is as integral a part of their relationship as any fluffy part.

raichu100 September 28 2011, 19:30:26 UTC

Well, I think you really achieved a good balance by focusing on their relationship development. It wasn't ALL ABOUT TEH SEX but the kissing scene was very well done.~

bleu_skies March 25 2012, 05:50:24 UTC

OMG im so glad i gave this fic a chance. it was sooo good!! Im kinda sad i didnt discover it earlier! The journey you wrote all the way to the end was so pleasant and interesting. Green's character analysis was probably one of the best I've read so far. This was fantastic! The ending was so cute <3

Excellent job! <3