Moon Song, Chapter One

[jenerik_brand]

Sorry for any x-posting.

Title: "Moon Song" Chapter One
Pairing: Sess/Inu
author: jenerik_brand
Warnings: noncon shota, violence, Sess at his worst
Rating: xxx
a/n: dedicated to my awesome beta lillith8

Comments

[himura_arimikoe]

Holy shit.

I am... amazed at this. This could easily stand alone as a oneshot, but this should be interesting to see as a series. Sesshoumaru is annoying, the way he refers to himself, but that cadence really shows just how messed up he is.

Brilliant writing, brilliant psychology. I shivered at this line;

"We always intended to kill him every time we caught him. And we did, in little parts."

Breathtaking. I'm looking forward to more of this.

[jenerik_brand]

Thank you so much! You are way too kind. My ego thanks you, too!

[sadler_girl]

This has me speechless, I read it and came back to tell you how much I enjoyed it . I really liked it , very complex and full of just raw emotion,so good. Thats about as much sense as this will let my brain make.

[jenerik_brand]

Thank you very much. So glad you enjoyed it! That is very nice of you to say!

[dothacknetslum]

Amazing. I agree with the people above, with what the wrote in their reviews...

Heehee. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm curious if your gonna stick with Sesshy's point of view somewhat or go to Inuyasha's.

I love how you wrote it. Like the others said before, its filled with tons of raw emotions, and I like you refer to Sesshomaru.

[jenerik_brand]

Wow! Thank you for that review! I'm glad you liked it, and I'll be sure to post the update here :D

[hunger_me]

Omg... This is AMAZING! this is awesome, I'm telling ALL MY FRIENDS! LOL I just joined live journal and am completely amazed by the amount of content I am finding.... *cries*... I totaly wish i had discovered this sooner. But this was amazing, seriously. Though I WAS a littel confused by Sesshomaru always reffering himself as "we, us, etc" Was he talking about his yokai, himself and the yokai? Or is he just demented?

[jenerik_brand]

Wow- thank you! ^-^ If you want to read more it's here. He refers o himself with the "royal we," like Queen Victoria used to do. ("We are not amused.") But enough people have asked if he's crazy, reffering to his yokai, etc that it's an open ended interpretation XD

Can't help but notice you kinda dig Naruto! Have you read na-no-nai's Naruto stuff? Oh! She's so talented. Go see. She's a sweetheart, too.

[christinalp]

I LIKE THIS!