Comments | inuyashacooks: hetalia oneshot || por clara y por oscura;

inuyashacooks

hetalia oneshot || por clara y por oscura;

Oct 17, 2009 10:22

title: Por Clara Y Por Oscura
pairing: France x Spain
rating: PG-13ish I guess, for France being France XD
summary: Through the years, they're apart, and then they're together.

( their kisses, always like sand and smoke, no matter what the flavor... )

Comments 10

silvancleric October 17 2009, 18:07:21 UTC

Ahh one of those slice of life type stories. Mmm your descriptions remind me alot of some of the books I read as a kid. Absolutely love the overall tone of the story. It's that light tang that always leaves you craving for more.

Also lols at the notes. For some reason that kinda makes me glad I took Spanish instead of French. Would had probably embarrassed myself.

inuyashacooks October 17 2009, 18:14:57 UTC

:D aww, thank you! i'm glad you liked :3

and heh, yeah, french can be a confusing language. kinda makes you think france does it on purpose XD

tupelo_thief October 17 2009, 18:11:06 UTC

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH SO. FUCKIN. OSSIM!!!!!!!11 kk, down to bizniz:

"He could watch Spain..." this WHOLE paragraph AND the next one- fucking PERFECT, totally spain *BONEZ*

"And here France was..." and this whole paragraph too!

"now there was a new unstructured meaning to the smile of his jaw" WIN WIN WIN

"with his sun collecting" um, i think YES.

"their kisses, always like sand and smoke, no matter what the flavor" DELICIOUS.

"-Because our bodies are bound by a contract; we're apart, and then together- these long roads of time will always lead to love, sooner or later." *aspoldes*

THIS is pure golden pulitzer prize winning OSSIMNESS. "I don't normally ship them but THIS is excellent!" Imma totally have a francexspain icon nao :D

inuyashacooks October 17 2009, 18:16:46 UTC

:DDDDD LOLOL I MADE YOU EXPPLODE

:D i ♥ spain!

also wait till you finish the next one XD i have a feeling youll like it bitch

tupelo_thief October 17 2009, 19:38:42 UTC

dude, i exploded like 78 times today XD.

inuyashacooks October 18 2009, 14:21:08 UTC

no u

frostberrytea October 17 2009, 19:59:15 UTC

...

I really should have something utterly intelligent to say.

But the single word that comes to my mind right now is; win.

Like, pure, epic win of Berry loves you and she needed some fantastically lovely France/Spain today and Christ, France, my darling, so cute and Spain...

I'll be over in the corner hugging this fic.

I suppose I did have something to say after all.

inuyashacooks October 18 2009, 14:22:53 UTC

:D! "win," i like that word.

hahah, i'm glad you liked! :D france/spain needs like more fandom, x100000. they're just too cute 8D

finally, a chance to use a new icon! insomniel October 18 2009, 01:27:25 UTC

How lovely and poetic~ Thanks for sharing, it was beautiful and made me smile to read.

inuyashacooks October 18 2009, 14:24:16 UTC

thank you! :D i'm glad ya liked it :D

and, hm, that is a cute icon 8D...*glares at lj userpic limit*